Recent Comments

7/22/23, 1:45 PM
The way Nate's fathers are introduced is so hot - not even their drone designations matter anymore. Those specialists must be eager to be converted at this point!
7/22/23, 11:18 AM
Shame this didn’t happen when I was hitch hiking. Great story
7/22/23, 11:14 AM
Hot as hell makes me wish I could find a tenant like that 😈
7/22/23, 10:57 AM
Extremely well written, as with all your writing, but I didn't personally enjoy this one as much as many of your other stories.
Apr 22, 2019
7/22/23, 10:40 AM
Brilliant story - really enjoyed this one!
7/22/23, 10:31 AM
Great idea and excellent writing. Very horny!
7/21/23, 2:13 AM
Amazing concept and I love the thought of the suits changing the swim team’s self identity without changing them. More please!

7/22/23, 10:24 AM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) Exactly!
7/22/23, 10:24 AM
I'm not completely sure what was going on but it was hot and the submission was just excellent. I hope more chapters will come out soon :)
Anonymous
7/22/23, 9:21 AM
Eddie suggesting that Matt sealed his dad's fate by crying for help was hot! But unless I misread, it sounded like he'd already enslaved Richard even before the phone conversation with Matt. Maybe tweak it so that Richard is always away on business, and only comes back to town on Matthew's insistence? And yeah, in case it wasn't obvious I really dig Eddie and hope he gets his way and takes complete control of Matt's family and friends. But I'm a little worried that he's starting to get reckless. How long can he continue like this before too many people start asking questions or he runs the family business into the ground(and his "human ATM" with it)? I'm rooting for him to make the smart move and rein things in just enough so he can keep milking his new "family" for a good long while. What can I say, sometimes it's fun to cheer on the bad guys :wink:
Purplefrancis
7/22/23, 9:12 AM
God I wanna strangle this POS so much.