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CHT
7/21/23, 8:53 PM
Hope this story isnt over 😢
7/21/23, 8:50 PM
Please keep this going. These are some of my fav Jo stories.
7/21/23, 12:46 PM
This is really wholesome, honestly. Despite the heavy dom/sub relationships going on, everyone finds the time to pause, take stock of the reality of the humans behind it, and acknowledge each other. I like this very, very much, and of course the sex is hot as fuck.

Anonymous
7/21/23, 12:51 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks mate. Glad you noticed this. There is a whole book (2 in fact) of Todd's adventures. And it's really important that the characters return to normal after hot kinky sex otherwise the story loses a little bit each time

7/21/23, 8:12 PM
@Anonymous Exactly, I understand what you mean. There needs to be an acknowledgment that this is all play, that identities aren't really at stake, in order to keep things healthy for everyone. It's something I think about a lot, considering how many dom/sub dynamics I write that are thick with play. Are those books from your collection of gay mystery fiction?

7/21/23, 8:20 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) It's a real problem I think. I talk to young guys these days and their whole concept of sex is sub/dom. They seem to think "rape" is the sex they should aim for. Bit of a generalisation, but you get the idea. I think it's important to embrace the fun. Even in this erotica. These stories aren't from my gay fiction. But Todd features as a character in my mystery novels. And a numer of the other characters will appear. I used to sell this as a novel but I took it off the market. I put it on Nifty but I don't think I'm the first author to have a little run in with the moderator there

7/21/23, 8:38 PM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) Yeah, I'm personally really trying to embrace the idea of play, both IRL and in my writing. I've got no illusions about how much power matters to sex, but I think that power can and should be exerted in a healthy way, and that's what makes it fun for everyone. We're glad to have you on the site. I can't imagine what about this story would make it unacceptable for Nifty, considering what I've heard goes on there, but what do I know? I hope you think this place is great for hosting. (And maybe you'll check out some of the stories, too!)

Anonymous
7/21/23, 8:42 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Hey if you want to chat further, you can message me on Instagram @sohoeatingguide
7/21/23, 12:24 PM
Damn, this was hot as fuck! I love a good small dom/big sub, I loved Max’s confidence, and I loved how easily Todd got into it. Max completely asserting his dominance over and over again was hot, though I’m a little annoyed at him for being such a jerk at the end with the ‘poofters’ comment. But otherwise, the dirty talk was immaculate. Always good to see a fellow Cupid writer! This site needs more hot smut!

7/21/23, 3:06 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Yeah Max is a dick. Am I taking a teeny tiny bit of revenge on someone in my past??? Or am I telling it like it is. And there's nothing a writer likes then being told "his dirty talk is immaculate". I'm gunna go wank off to that thought right now!

7/21/23, 8:10 PM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) Heh, I'm an author myself and I know how it feels to get that kind of feedback. I always try to leave comments that note things the author did well, because I know I want them too! And hey, revenge through writing they'll never see? Probably the best kind. Satisfies you with no real-world harm to them. There was a 'Leo' in my life I've been tempted to write as a bottom...
7/21/23, 4:33 PM
Nice twist, which opens up many opportunities for the characters -- the way Taylor is evolving is very interesting.
Zander
7/21/23, 3:36 PM
Thanks for the follow up. Yes, Jonathan, you have a chance to get everything back, of course, if you act secretly, and not openly (I understand that John will act this way because he is smart as shown in this chapter) and if the author of the story, of course, probably allows. I don’t know where the author will turn the plot of the story in the future, but I am rooting for John (and if everything ends well for him and he can return everything), I hope that he will draw conclusions and learn a lesson from the situation that has developed with him (as he once drew conclusions and was able to change for the better Scrooge from the cartoon "A Christmas Carol").
7/19/23, 4:42 PM
The first part of this series was intriguing but this chapter is amazing -- well done!

7/21/23, 3:02 PM
@[Want23Explore](/user/show/10030290) Thanks for the love. I promise there's more, and it gets even hotter. Though if you tell me it made you cum, then I'll really know I did my job!

7/21/23, 3:21 PM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) More to come and even hotter? Whew, I need to take off my shirt, again!
Zander
7/21/23, 3:12 PM
Great story, I want to see the sequel soon. I especially want to see more sex scenes of Sarge and Buster.
7/19/23, 8:35 PM
Love where this is going, looking forward to more!

7/21/23, 3:02 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks for the love. I promise there's more, and it gets even hotter. Though if you tell me it made you cum, then I'll really know I did my job!
7/20/23, 1:47 PM
Really enjoying this dynamic and the characters get more interesting over time. Can’t wait to see how their journey unfolds

7/21/23, 3:02 PM
@[Butterpecan](/user/show/1527212) Thanks for the love. I promise there's more, and it gets even hotter. Though if you tell me it made you cum, then I'll really know I did my job!