Recent Comments

7/21/23, 2:05 PM
I like the transformation but i feel bad for him losing his other half. Hope they get back together.
7/21/23, 1:45 PM
Love this story!! Hope you find a passion for it again and want to do the next chapter šŸ˜
R P
7/21/23, 1:32 PM
This is a beautifully evocative start, I’m excited to read more
7/21/23, 12:05 PM
Getting really good transformation wise and I can imagine more twists ahead.
Anonymous
7/21/23, 11:30 AM
Some of these were hot but I'm not sure how they connect with the theme of the contest.
7/21/23, 11:27 AM
God I do love a bad ending
7/21/23, 10:56 AM
Please need the next chapter ASAP! Its so good
Martin
7/21/23, 9:32 AM
You created a branch with this new chapter. I wonder if that was intentional? If not, edit the chapter and check the "Previous chapter" field to fix it.

7/21/23, 10:27 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Fixed
7/21/23, 10:06 AM
and there it is... the point I was so afraid of... poor Jonathan. Now he lost the love of his life ._. please tell me he is going to get his husband back ._. I dont think my little romantic heart could handle that.
7/21/23, 9:18 AM
This is getting better and better. Can't wait to see what comes next!