Recent Comments

7/21/23, 10:06 AM
and there it is... the point I was so afraid of... poor Jonathan. Now he lost the love of his life ._. please tell me he is going to get his husband back ._. I dont think my little romantic heart could handle that.
7/21/23, 9:18 AM
This is getting better and better. Can't wait to see what comes next!
R P
7/21/23, 9:13 AM
I love this series, and this is such a perfect end to it. I’m a sucker for a happy ending and this is so beautifully sweet and hot.
7/21/23, 9:04 AM
Like the other commenters - very good start and can't wait to read more!
Jul 21, 2023
7/21/23, 8:09 AM
Jack you are a creative genius. What a concept fuck yourself with your own live cock ( not a replica of it). Super hero becomes super slut hooked on his own cock, fantastic!
Anonymous
7/21/23, 8:01 AM
Legit some of the best clown stuff on this site. I'd kill for a sequel.
Anonymous
7/21/23, 7:09 AM
interesting twist. the chapter needs more sex and slutty panties. some sph wouldn't hurt either.
7/21/23, 6:53 AM
I would love to have a "cum" shower. :slightly_smiling_face:
Anonymous
7/21/23, 6:50 AM
super hot!! I love a story with a younger top and a hot older stud who's really a slutty pussy bitch in heat. his small tiny dick and how he gets turned on by the humiliation is a bonus.
7/21/23, 6:20 AM
What several others here said - it's rushed, but the beginnings of writing talent are here. Slow down, take your time, and refine your craft. You have potential - a spark of talent that should not go to waste.