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R P
7/21/23, 9:13 AM
I love this series, and this is such a perfect end to it. I’m a sucker for a happy ending and this is so beautifully sweet and hot.
7/21/23, 9:04 AM
Like the other commenters - very good start and can't wait to read more!
Jul 21, 2023
7/21/23, 8:09 AM
Jack you are a creative genius. What a concept fuck yourself with your own live cock ( not a replica of it). Super hero becomes super slut hooked on his own cock, fantastic!
Anonymous
7/21/23, 8:01 AM
Legit some of the best clown stuff on this site. I'd kill for a sequel.
Anonymous
7/21/23, 7:09 AM
interesting twist. the chapter needs more sex and slutty panties. some sph wouldn't hurt either.
7/21/23, 6:53 AM
I would love to have a "cum" shower. :slightly_smiling_face:
Anonymous
7/21/23, 6:50 AM
super hot!! I love a story with a younger top and a hot older stud who's really a slutty pussy bitch in heat. his small tiny dick and how he gets turned on by the humiliation is a bonus.
7/21/23, 6:20 AM
What several others here said - it's rushed, but the beginnings of writing talent are here. Slow down, take your time, and refine your craft. You have potential - a spark of talent that should not go to waste.
7/21/23, 6:10 AM
This felt different from other swizz stories, since the changes happened so early and immediately. I personally really enjoy the gradual shift and felt the change was a bit early. But still a great piece that gave me a chance to edge after the conversion happened ;)
7/21/23, 5:19 AM
Super hot sex, a nice fun build-up with some resistance that helped me buy into the hot jock identity of the characters (which in turn made the slutty girlfriend identity hotter). Really liked that the transformation was all mental. You described the physicality of the swimmer jocks in a hot way and a lot of stories that play with this girlfriend-boyfriend dynamic also involve some feminizing physical transformations, but that would have lost the sex appeal of the swimmer bodies you described. Thanks for sharing your work!