Recent Comments

7/19/23, 10:50 PM
I liked that start. I really want to see Eddie corrupting Ryan more and more, the meeting between him and Matt's father (if you plan to write about that) and Eddie tormenting Matt. I'm just kind of sad that Eddie won't hypnotize Matt and leave him out of the fun, but I have a vague hope that you have something prepared especially for him in the next few chapters.
7/19/23, 10:46 PM
Happy to see you back writing!
7/19/23, 9:39 PM
Aw man. You make sex so sweet and delightful.
Martin
7/19/23, 8:17 PM
Do we get to read how Eddie is actually taking his boys into oblivion?
7/19/23, 6:56 PM
Somehow I felt that this was mostly a transition chapter showing the changing mindset of Jon. While it was interesting I didn't find it at all 'sexy' as I had the previous chapters. I was a little bit suprised that his husband seemed somewhat shocked to see him helping by washing the dish s as I would have thought his mindset is also accepting the new reality of Jon being more of a servant & no longer an equal.

7/19/23, 7:00 PM
@[little tiny tim](/user/show/14101) Yep, this was more of a transitional chapter. There's more to come with this story—I think you'll enjoy where things are headed!

7/19/23, 7:37 PM
@[Promethol](/user/show/241079) I can't wait !!! : Here's hoping your a fast writer [ha!, ha!], as your story is the first thing I've been turning to every morning !!!...I love how reality is slowly changing [& hope that we get a few shifts in the characters 'past' reality as well ] I would love to see the characters 'former' life change..somewhat explaining their new reality. [I also love Jon's sexual disfunction & hope it is further developed]: SPH, micro's & premature ej. are all favorite's of mine!! I only hope his former husband & new lover would treat him with the growing 'Disrespect' his growing inferiority deserves !!!!!!
7/19/23, 1:54 AM
Seriously hot and sweet as well, as the roles start taking over, their bond is lovely as fuck, which makes it even hotter. Fantastic job!

7/19/23, 6:52 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
7/17/23, 4:48 AM
Suuuuper hot

7/19/23, 6:52 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Cheers! I'm glad to hear people are enjoying it!
Lampshade15
7/16/23, 10:23 PM
This chapter was even hotter than the last, I'd love to read more! Sarge makes such a sexy, sexy daddy and Adrian's transformation into his son is so hot.

7/19/23, 6:52 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Thank you so much
7/16/23, 10:04 PM
This story is so smoking hot. The smelling references of cologne and musk... or when he opens his pants and the smells ... WOW! Ilove it.

7/19/23, 6:51 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I'm glad to gear you enjoyed it!
7/19/23, 6:32 PM
Absolutely loving this slow corruption.