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7/18/23, 9:26 AM
I wish I was Tom!
Anonymous
7/18/23, 5:55 AM
This actually happens all the time. Bert's make fine physicians, but their penmanship is awful.

7/18/23, 6:37 AM
@Anonymous I wonder how many young men wanting to become Doctor Bert ended up becoming douchey finance bros called Bart?
7/18/23, 6:28 AM
Wow, what a great story! It's crying out for a follow up with so many questions left unanswered... What characteristics do 'Bryces' have? Are they jocks, or himbos or maybe slutty twunks? Will we get to find out what Bryce's friends and family think when he gets home? Hope there's more to come!
Anonymous
7/18/23, 5:08 AM
This is so well written, an amazing use of 4000 words. So much world building and building of anticipation with the perfect payoff. 💯
Dec 6, 2022
7/18/23, 4:09 AM
Gotta admit, incest rarely does it for me, but you hit so many other good spots with this story it didn't matter. Wrestling, supernatural undies, singlets, hot anal sex... It was really fun to read!
7/18/23, 3:31 AM
This was great!
7/18/23, 3:20 AM
This is a really fun concept and a really interesting universe! I hope to see more of the Carnival and its games!
7/18/23, 2:39 AM
I love this story so much, thank you for continuing it!!! I can’t wait to see what will happen when Jake’s other jocks friends come into the picture. Thank you so much for writing this!! You’re awesome!!
Muscle-Flex
7/15/23, 3:39 AM
A creative response to the challenge. I had as much fun as Simon did!

The Author
7/18/23, 2:35 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thanks so much! Glad you liked it, it was a fun concept to explore.