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7/17/23, 5:20 PM
Great start, well written - I could almost smell Zahir!
7/17/23, 2:41 PM
One, how did you write 11k words in one week? Maybe that's your superhero power. Maybe you're Glen hmmm Two, thank you for continuing this series! I wasn't sure how you were going to explore this universe, but I love the direction! I'm so happy to see Farsights downfall is from his own arrogance and can't wait for him to get strapped in and give Subduer what's his, though not sure if Subduer even wants his powers. Wasn't expecting to see Caleb be so dominant, but his proud self is still there, even after everything's that's happened. Something that would ebe hot to see is if they could "reset" Caleb so he could reexperience how far he's fallen. Can't wait for the next chapter! Gold Force doesn't know what's coming, and I'm curious to see how his interaction with Feathertouch goes, especially depending on the power dynamics of their relationship.

7/17/23, 3:10 PM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) If that's my superpower then I wish I had the ability to pace myself better too! :D And, yes, I'm also looking forward to placing Farsight firmly in The Subduer's clutches! You also touch on something that stands out to me, but you'll have to wait and see what THAT means,...

7/17/23, 3:12 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Ahh so excited! I also forgot to mention that I really appreciate you name dropping a couple other heroes. Helps with the fantasy to imagine the downfall of all these heroes

7/17/23, 4:19 PM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) :thumbsup:
Anonymous
7/17/23, 4:13 PM
I need the name of those poppers! 😈
EatingMenFaeces
7/17/23, 3:55 PM
Amazing
7/17/23, 3:34 PM
Ooh it's a four parter? Really enjoying the story so far. Reminds of your other werewolf story, but enjoying how it's different :)
7/17/23, 1:58 AM
Oh wow, i just read this story in one go and i didnt expect to like and enjoy it. Cant wait to read more of it. Im torn if i want him to stay small and have more fun with Harvey or have him gain size. But if they do fix him back, i hope this is a wake up call for Wash. Be gay and maybe a better person.

7/17/23, 5:14 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Hehe. Are you not a shrink/micro fan but found you enjoy the story anyway? Whatever the case, I hope you enjoy the rest as well. I could answer your questions, but I think it'd be better if you keep reading.

7/17/23, 3:27 PM
@[Ziel](/user/show/1683554) Well i cant really say that im a fan ~~or not~~ since i this is my first time reading this kind of kink/category. I guess my liking of big top small bottom explains that. Huh. You learn something everyday.
7/17/23, 2:34 PM
Oh wow, i love this changing of point of view. Not surprised but shock to read the corruption to Farsight. Cant wait to read the next chapter.

7/17/23, 3:05 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) So glad you liked it! Fun fact; I was shocked to see Farsight's corruption in this chapter too! Someone else was due to have a 'good time' here but, just as it played out, the poor guy fell into the rabbit hole of brainwashing before my eyes! He never came out and I'm happier with that than my original plan for the group.
7/17/23, 4:02 AM
Another week, another amazing chapter! It's been a while since I've so looked forward to checking for updates every day. I particularly love how you're balancing the wonderful weight gain with a "social contagion" factor (people slowly being drawn into the gaining fold, so quietly you don't even realize it's happening), along with some genuinely big questions about responsibility, the fear of being named a "narc" (which comes up in a LOT of work spaces), and even algorithm learning. It's a great series, and it has one of my favorite kinks--all of it is fantastic! Well done. :D Oh, and for what I hope to see next: I'd love to see the point of view of someone actually being drawn into the experiment--seeing how their minds work as they justify why they're gaining weight and eating more and more. But whatever you write will surely be great! :)

7/17/23, 2:49 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thanks! This was so sweet. It means the world to me to see people enjoy the story so far. And the following chapters might include what you look for ;)
7/17/23, 2:46 PM
Always been a sucker for age progression stories, where the hapless young man finds himself aged and fattened up, and this one does a good job of exploring what life is like once it's all been said and done. I like how he seems to be getting a mixture of embarrassment and enjoyment from his situation, which would probably mirror my own if such a thing were to happen.
7/17/23, 2:06 PM
Hay m8, what the fuc , you make up all these stories, throw them in a blender ,& expect it to work out. You started it, fuc, now sit your Ass down & finish something. Cum on manup & stop being a Fuc'n pansey ! You've dragged this Shit out long enough Shithead. You Fuc'n little fag you need to be taught a lesson & put you in your place. Let's see what everyone can cum up with to do back to you, I'm sure All the readers will do better to end all this shit you Fuc'n cocksucker cunt perverted wannabe slut . Would love to see you get it in the end spitroasted cum filled drooling & dripping out your little cunt, shaving you down & turn you into femfag or masculinize & butch you up with MPB or waxed head so you can't change it, ever & be stuck in your hell. Apparently you can't handle it on your own ! So either man up or let anyone push you aside to do it, it has to be done, you flighty Fuc'n asshole , there you need more? Just ask ! Now sit your god dam Fuc'n ass down & be done with it, or else, oh, don't ment to be rude, now how do you like it ?

Martin
7/17/23, 2:21 PM
@[Vikingforce](/user/show/1115978) Now, I've read other comments you've written and it looks like you're actually a fan of Edlam's work. You could have fooled me. RP or not... in reality most authors probably don't take this kind of treatment too well. The final sentence in your comment doesn't change that, if at all, it should have been at the beginning of your comment to make clear that this is meant "in character". And even then... I'll let Edlam decide if he wants me to delete this comment. I can't tell whether he's offended by this or not.