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7/17/23, 2:46 PM
Always been a sucker for age progression stories, where the hapless young man finds himself aged and fattened up, and this one does a good job of exploring what life is like once it's all been said and done. I like how he seems to be getting a mixture of embarrassment and enjoyment from his situation, which would probably mirror my own if such a thing were to happen.
7/17/23, 2:06 PM
Hay m8, what the fuc , you make up all these stories, throw them in a blender ,& expect it to work out. You started it, fuc, now sit your Ass down & finish something. Cum on manup & stop being a Fuc'n pansey ! You've dragged this Shit out long enough Shithead. You Fuc'n little fag you need to be taught a lesson & put you in your place. Let's see what everyone can cum up with to do back to you, I'm sure All the readers will do better to end all this shit you Fuc'n cocksucker cunt perverted wannabe slut . Would love to see you get it in the end spitroasted cum filled drooling & dripping out your little cunt, shaving you down & turn you into femfag or masculinize & butch you up with MPB or waxed head so you can't change it, ever & be stuck in your hell. Apparently you can't handle it on your own ! So either man up or let anyone push you aside to do it, it has to be done, you flighty Fuc'n asshole , there you need more? Just ask ! Now sit your god dam Fuc'n ass down & be done with it, or else, oh, don't ment to be rude, now how do you like it ?

Martin
7/17/23, 2:21 PM
@[Vikingforce](/user/show/1115978) Now, I've read other comments you've written and it looks like you're actually a fan of Edlam's work. You could have fooled me. RP or not... in reality most authors probably don't take this kind of treatment too well. The final sentence in your comment doesn't change that, if at all, it should have been at the beginning of your comment to make clear that this is meant "in character". And even then... I'll let Edlam decide if he wants me to delete this comment. I can't tell whether he's offended by this or not.
May 12, 2018
Bibimbap
5/13/18, 5:44 AM
Excellent! It's great how progressively girly, wimpy and submissive Ash becomes without notice it and your descriptions all across the story, it's a wonderful and hot transformation. The descriptions and the dialogues are so well done! the pacing is perfect, no so fast and not so slow, good job in that! I love Turk's suggestion, Ass-lee ia a very debasing name for a former straight man, I would love to read a follow up with Ash enjoying being called Ass-lee, going furthner into his unmanliness, while he feels conflicted and guilty for enjoing it so much. Maybe Gary could rewritte the memories of Ash's friends or people around him that have noticed his change. I've enjoyed My Black Neighbor, it's a great story, but personally, this one was hotter to me. By the moment that Turk appeared on the door, I was about to burst like a champagne cork. The last part of the story was pure blis, if you know what I mean.

7/17/23, 2:13 PM
@Bibimbap Loved it to
May 12, 2018
cc532c@att.net
5/13/18, 1:35 AM
Very well done. I've always loved the way you can move a story along without skimping on the details. the name-play thing was inspired! And you left it open-ended... just to tease us?

7/17/23, 2:12 PM
@cc532c@att.net Agreed. Love the story so much, as well. Seem to cum back to re-read. Lol
Anonymous
7/17/23, 1:44 PM
This is unbelievably hot, you really capture the mental struggle well! I can’t wait to see what you have in store!
7/17/23, 1:40 PM
I love this story I cant wait for the next part
Anonymous
7/17/23, 5:38 AM
Part of me wonders just what ~~horrors~~ delights **The Subduer** could visit upon his ~~enemies~~ future slaves with Farsight's power at his disposal...but another part thinks that might make things too easy. He needs to give the other ~~heroes~~ poor saps all the advantages they can get if they're going to put up any kind of struggle, especially if they're even half as foolhardy as Farsight. World domination's no fun without a *little* resistance, I say!

7/17/23, 1:39 PM
@Anonymous I think you'd get on well with The Subduer. I see you think alike,...
7/17/23, 4:38 AM
Another great chapter! Excited to see it continued.

7/17/23, 1:38 PM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Thank you! More on the way :)
Anonymous
7/17/23, 1:03 PM
Hot stuff. I have to say.Hope he becomes the college cum dump.? All those horny teens need a mouth....or an arse,to get off
7/17/23, 12:24 PM
Can't wait for Part 2!