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May 12, 2018
Bibimbap
5/13/18, 5:44 AM
Excellent! It's great how progressively girly, wimpy and submissive Ash becomes without notice it and your descriptions all across the story, it's a wonderful and hot transformation. The descriptions and the dialogues are so well done! the pacing is perfect, no so fast and not so slow, good job in that! I love Turk's suggestion, Ass-lee ia a very debasing name for a former straight man, I would love to read a follow up with Ash enjoying being called Ass-lee, going furthner into his unmanliness, while he feels conflicted and guilty for enjoing it so much. Maybe Gary could rewritte the memories of Ash's friends or people around him that have noticed his change. I've enjoyed My Black Neighbor, it's a great story, but personally, this one was hotter to me. By the moment that Turk appeared on the door, I was about to burst like a champagne cork. The last part of the story was pure blis, if you know what I mean.

7/17/23, 2:13 PM
@Bibimbap Loved it to
May 12, 2018
cc532c@att.net
5/13/18, 1:35 AM
Very well done. I've always loved the way you can move a story along without skimping on the details. the name-play thing was inspired! And you left it open-ended... just to tease us?

7/17/23, 2:12 PM
@cc532c@att.net Agreed. Love the story so much, as well. Seem to cum back to re-read. Lol
Anonymous
7/17/23, 1:44 PM
This is unbelievably hot, you really capture the mental struggle well! I can’t wait to see what you have in store!
7/17/23, 1:40 PM
I love this story I cant wait for the next part
Anonymous
7/17/23, 5:38 AM
Part of me wonders just what ~~horrors~~ delights **The Subduer** could visit upon his ~~enemies~~ future slaves with Farsight's power at his disposal...but another part thinks that might make things too easy. He needs to give the other ~~heroes~~ poor saps all the advantages they can get if they're going to put up any kind of struggle, especially if they're even half as foolhardy as Farsight. World domination's no fun without a *little* resistance, I say!

7/17/23, 1:39 PM
@Anonymous I think you'd get on well with The Subduer. I see you think alike,...
7/17/23, 4:38 AM
Another great chapter! Excited to see it continued.

7/17/23, 1:38 PM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Thank you! More on the way :)
Anonymous
7/17/23, 1:03 PM
Hot stuff. I have to say.Hope he becomes the college cum dump.? All those horny teens need a mouth....or an arse,to get off
7/17/23, 12:24 PM
Can't wait for Part 2!
Anonymous
7/17/23, 10:57 AM
Poor Jon. I can't help but feel bad for him. I don't think he wanted this to be a long term thing.

7/17/23, 11:16 AM
@Anonymous I want to be Jon hahaha
Jul 10, 2017
7/17/23, 11:11 AM
I'm enojoying all of your stories, but this one was particularly hot!