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7/16/23, 5:52 PM
I was hoping the coach might encounter some shrinkage, too :)

7/17/23, 5:11 AM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Unfortunately, I had no intention for the coach to be a character. Even the small scene he got was more than I had intended in the original drafts.

7/17/23, 5:14 AM
@[Ziel](/user/show/1683554) No worries! Whatever journey this story takes, I'm here for it :)
7/17/23, 5:09 AM
Fucking amazing.
7/17/23, 4:45 AM
there isn't actually anything in here about names? adjectives, arguably nicknames, but no _names_. there is nothing about the power of names and no "nominative determinism" going on in this story. maybe that's pedantic criticism, but honestly it seems like you had something already written, slapped a title onto it that relates to the contest tyne but not the story, and uploaded it just for the sake of participating.
7/17/23, 4:17 AM
Reading this certainly had me throbbing. As others have said, it would be very interesting to see how Christian might pollute multiple guys at once.
Jun 11, 2023
Wtf
7/17/23, 2:50 AM
Why do people write half ass stories. Like what is the point.. seriously, what was the point of this? It’s just dumb and pointless , tf

Throne
7/17/23, 3:40 AM
@Wtf It's a fantasy situation that some readers like. What sort of story would you prefer that I write?
6/30/23, 10:25 PM
I don't know that I've read an actual realization moment in this site that was so realistically portrayed (as opposed to forced by transformation or coercion), and it was very sweet. Well done.

7/17/23, 3:35 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Well, this is one of the first fics published on GayCupidStories, so I'm not exactly surprised that this is one of the first realistic 'realisations'—it just wasn't the typical _oeuvre_ of Spiral, I'm sure. But I tried my best, and I'm pleased with how it came out (heh). Although most of my stories involve characters who are already certain that they're gay, I care a lot about the theme of self-discovery, so writing this well was important to me.
6/23/23, 4:59 PM
Wow, that was so incredibly sweet, and yet managed to veer away from saccharine, with the help of an almost literal cum geyser at the end. Delightful, funny, and a sweet love story with differentiated characters. Very well done!

7/17/23, 3:32 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) The fact that it started as a simple "guy goes back in time to get a girl, wakes up with a husband about to top the absolute shit out of him" probably has a bit to do with the wicked turn it takes at the end! But a lot of evolution and many surprises to me went into making it something I could consider beautiful, and not just decadently sexual. I'm glad you found it sweet.
Martin
7/16/23, 8:51 PM
Soooo slow burning. But the painfully slow conversion is also painfully hot!

7/17/23, 3:32 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I agree. Its a torture and very painful but very HOT slow burn of a story.
7/17/23, 2:42 AM
Oh lord wow that's hot. I'm not usually a fan of dumbing down but the giggles super hot. Very sexy story! Hope that there is some rimming.
7/17/23, 1:41 AM
Holy fuck this is incredible.