Recent Comments

bucke
7/16/23, 8:12 PM
Wow, this was so creative and hot! Is this going to be a series? Or just a one off? I'd love to see more.

7/16/23, 8:23 PM
@[bucke](/user/show/908598) Thank you, I'm glad you found it creative. I know the whole mirror things has been done before but I tried to make it a little different. And I'm not planning on making it a series, we won't like see Jason or Nate again but Dietrich might show up again, who knows.
Martin
7/16/23, 8:22 PM
Very promising and spicy start for a hopefully wonderful story!
7/16/23, 8:12 PM
Antinous! Hadrian's deified lover and a Roman cult god! I love it when my love of Roman history pays off. ;-)
Zander
7/16/23, 7:45 PM
The story is good, looking forward to the confrontation between the Angel and the Demon. It will be interesting to see how Neil frees Frank and his sons from influence.
7/16/23, 7:37 PM
Had a reread of this in one go while lounging away in the mountains. What an absolute gem! Thanks again for sharing this world and such wonderful characters with all of us
Anonymous
7/16/23, 6:57 PM
That is sooo hot!
7/16/23, 6:01 PM
This was such an _interesting_ short story, I almost forgot it was erotica too... Until Lyle and Jacob's sex scene. I feel like there's a much greater story that could be told here, though this was nicely self-contained. Thank you for sharing it!
7/16/23, 4:35 PM
Jack you’ve got me programmed from reading your stories to the point that I get so excited when I start one that I’ve never read before or am rereading one that my cock bones up and starts leaking right away. I think I’m addicted. And I love it.
7/16/23, 4:33 PM
Really enjoying this!
7/16/23, 5:29 AM
I see it as a risky situation at the very least that Dwight has no hypnotic triggers to ensure his obedience, no matter how stupid he is. Besides, I highly doubt he'll be able to hide from his boyfriend that he made sex with his boss to get a promotion. And I still don't understand how the protagonist avoided the hypnotic effect of Dwight's chest. Those issues aside, I think the story is excellent, with great descriptions and development. Anxious for more!

7/16/23, 12:56 PM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Thanks! Y'know, I agree with you! Dwight's continued obedience is going to need some work. And his boyfriend is no idiot - quite the opposite - so perhaps there might be some conflict there in the future, eh? ;) As for the avoiding the effect, the MC wears "protective shades" - sunglasses, though I might play with that element in the future. Cheers!