Recent Comments

Mind Bender
7/14/23, 1:25 AM
Hi! I read this story last year on a different site. Imagine my surprise when I found out there were 8 more parts! I love this story, it is one of my all time favorites! I hope you continue it!

7/14/23, 1:39 AM
@Mind Bender Thank you so much :3 I have a vague idea of what I'd want to do next, but executing it is sort of the problem. I hope what I come up with won't be too disappointing ^^;

Mind Bender
7/16/23, 11:36 PM
@[NewsScene](/user/show/270454) You never disappoint! You got this! You're an amazing story teller, I love the kaa like hypnosis you use. Thank you for this story, you're really one of my favorite writers ❤️ 😁

7/17/23, 12:26 AM
@Mind Bender I mean, the problem is, that’s how it started, and I tried to get creative and diverge a bit, and now it’s something else. At the very least, I need to try and give it a proper ending while somehow keeping up the proper connection between the original idea and imagery along with the handful of differing ideas and perspectives that I’ve gotten myself into.
7/17/23, 12:17 AM
That scene where a single drop of sweat travels down Brian's body and captures Kyle's full attention is :kissing_heart:
Hairyboy
7/13/23, 7:35 AM
Sheeeesh this was hot and easy to follow reading

7/17/23, 12:13 AM
@[Hairyboy](/user/show/10027672) Thank you. Some of my stuff can be a little less easy to follow then this 😅
7/16/23, 11:59 PM
Definitely a hot start. Can’t wait for more in the future :smile:
7/16/23, 11:54 PM
Ngl, I would be very happy with a part two.
7/16/23, 11:43 PM
Super hot start! I love it!
7/16/23, 9:16 PM
Peter’s frat buddies? Yes please! It’ll be really interesting to see how multiple guys get enslaved to the goonstench all at once. Great work on this part — seeing how Peter let himself go and how Christian was so enabling was extremely boner-inducing!

7/16/23, 11:32 PM
Communal jerk ring@[jockboy51](/user/show/936451)
7/16/23, 10:26 PM
love this... love the attention to the sense of smell. Please continue
7/16/23, 8:33 PM
Oh, I hope you do come back to this one day!
Lampshade15
7/16/23, 8:30 PM
This is one of the sexiest stories I've read. Love the idea of these guys turning into preppy, Stepford men. The black boxer briefs really got me going, as did the familial element.