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hypnosub
7/16/23, 5:30 AM
This first chapter was awesome! I started reading it earlier, and it was getting me soooo horny, I had to wait until the night to finish the chapter. And I'm glad I did! This was so sexy, and reading how Reed seduced Topger drove me crazy. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
7/16/23, 5:05 AM
i wonder what happens when every man is converted into a melon? either way this story and this series is super hot!!!
7/16/23, 3:52 AM
Well it was for me, definitely!
7/16/23, 3:19 AM
humm this could continue and be great.
7/15/23, 9:28 AM
I love this! Hope you continue it soon, because it's incredibly hot! One little quibble: is this meant to be set at a US university? Because some of the academic terms (like "module") come straight from the UK system, not the US one. If you need any editing help to make the story more "authentically" American, just message me!

7/16/23, 3:10 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Part 2 is almost done and certainly has a more definitively ‘Uk’ vibe to it. It is supposed to be set in an unnamed UK city / uni which I tried to get across with terminology like ‘modules’ and the way the guys talked. Evidence I wasn’t so successful haha
7/10/23, 10:10 PM
This is just unutterably adorable and I am loving reading it so much.

7/16/23, 2:51 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thanks! I'm glad people are reading it. I was worried my timing was so bad everybody missed it. Or worse, it was a dull chapter.
7/10/23, 7:37 PM
I mean, who hasn't accidentally a mad science nudity laser? I actually had to look up some words along the way for this one, heh. As always, I'm half entranced by your humor and writing talent, half turned on by your erotica.

7/16/23, 2:50 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Hopefully that adds up to a wholly satisfied reading experience!
Anonymous
7/15/23, 2:14 PM
Congratulations on finishing this series! I like the ending, especially knowing that now Derek and Ethan will be together forever. I'm glad to see this two get their happy ending in the end. Thanks for making this, can't wait to see your next series, along with the one-off.

7/16/23, 1:31 AM
@Anonymous Thank you so much. Ironically my plan for the new series will follow the style i had originally planned for this series. I really like world building and lore, and plan to make most of my stories interconected, and an anthology series is perfect for that.
7/16/23, 12:43 AM
This has been a thrill to read from start to finish with an awesome rubber conclusion. I just have one question about the ending: was there anything unique about Ethan's brother? He had a notable role in the later half of the series. Does he just end up a standard drone?

7/16/23, 1:20 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Yeah he is. I didn't include the fates of every character after Ethan's coronation because i felt it would take away from the apocalyptic feel I was going for. But yes, Eli is just a standard drone. With Ethan's mind warped from being inside the hive mind of the drones, the only thing driving him is lust and the rubbers primary programming (spread and assimilate). Where Todd was sadistic and enjoyed to see people squirm, Ethan is more restrained in his kinks and is a much less "brutal king" (which i tried to show in the difference between Todd's suit, which had an Emperors laural and less gold, and Ethan's suit which was brighter with a more kingly crown). However since his brother is not the item of his lust, Ethan simply sees no reason to elevate him or anyone else like he did with Derek.
hypnosub
7/15/23, 11:35 PM
This story was awesome! The descriptions of going under trance were immensely hot. I can't wait to see the next chapter!

7/16/23, 1:17 AM
@[hypnosub](/user/show/2185111) Glad you liked it. Was wondering if I had people going under too fast, lol