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2/23/23, 11:21 PM
I have so many thoughts on this, and what's happening. Thanks for keeping the mystery going, while still leaving really tantalizing clues everywhere. And uh, yeah. Cody at the very least had a bro crush on Allan, at least from the story he told, and was completely oblivious to it. And I'm left conflicted over whether Xander inadvertently did a good thing forcing the issue, or whether he ruined a budding slow romance. Gotta say, as sexy as Xander is, he's a real dick, too.

7/13/23, 10:34 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Hmmm... That's true but what did you think of him in part 6?
7/13/23, 6:54 PM
I love that its not a traditional dom/sub relationship, like there hierarchy there but its not all about the pleasure of the dom and they both seem to equally be into it and it seems alot more casual/fun

7/13/23, 10:31 PM
@[Bunny0Boi](/user/show/10021832) Thank you I thought it was fun to play around with the typical power dynamics. I hope you keep enjoying the rest of the series which I'm still working on actually. 😊
2/23/23, 8:58 PM
I am so glad I finally figured out how to use the search feature to find your stories ;-) this is great, and I don't normally get into high school stories much. But your ability to make characters come alive and paint them so well is fantastic.

7/13/23, 10:30 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Oh I'm very flattered that you went looking for my stories. An easy way is actually to go to the author's page there's a link to everything they've written on every author's page. https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/listSeries/263497
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7/13/23, 9:48 PM
Good start. Interested in seeing where this goes.
7/13/23, 8:29 PM
I do still kinda wonder how the rock popped up in their life. I mean, it could be exactly as Uri said, but Uri being Uri, and every word out of his mouth being some form of wrong, it's hard to take that seriously.
7/13/23, 8:24 PM
I know you tried to keep that wish a little secret, but I knew immediately what Freddy was going to wish for, and man, was that hot. Just goes to show that a spoiler -- even if your brain does it to itself -- doesn't have to ruin a damn thing. And you'd characterized Freddy well enough by that point that if the reader had been paying attention, they'd have every reason to know what Freddy's wish was going to be. I loved that Byrant loved what the wishes did for him, and that everyone, even damn Uri, was pleased in the end. A transformation story with a happy ending, what more could I wish for? Thank you so much for writing it, Nutiper!
pupScratch
7/13/23, 8:00 PM
Love everything about this, huffing COCKSTENCH especially. Already looking forward to part 3
7/13/23, 7:51 PM
looking forward to the next chapter starting with toilet >:)
7/13/23, 11:28 AM
Don’t be disheartened. Many people just don’t know how to vote (including myself). A lot of us are really looking forward for the next chapter.

Martin
7/13/23, 6:27 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) To rate a story, just click the big "Rate Story" bar at the bottom of the story - and then touch the symbols. The more to the right, the higher you rate.
7/13/23, 5:44 PM
To be clear, as much as I love Nutiper's work, there's as much room for fun sexy romps and dark seductive stuff in erotica as there is for cautionary tales (which, for a wish story, this is _perfect_). I look at Nutiper as someone to aspire to, but I love a bunch of other people's stuff here too :D