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7/13/23, 4:06 PM
Absolutely not a disappointment. One of the best "sheer force of will" mind control stories out there.
7/13/23, 4:06 PM
Very great can't wait to see the next chapter :p
Jul 10, 2023
7/11/23, 3:43 PM
"Can you smell cum?" Feels like it could be finished quickly, but I think my favorite is "Everything is alright"!

7/13/23, 3:12 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Whilst i really love that scene it's a bit stranded in the story at the moment. I had a kind of clear idea about what i wanted to write and then went off on a tangent and produced that scene about 2 years ago. I like it myself and keep returning to it so hopefully one day it will find it's place.
Jul 10, 2023
7/10/23, 10:21 PM
Jesus. Fucking. Christ. This was so HOT! The first snapshot, “Everything is Normal”, was my favorite and is the hottest thing I’ve read in quite a while. Would absolutely love to see it expanded upon into a full series. The mass enslavement, the mental struggle from the main character, and the fact that it was so easy for anyone to get enslaved (the description of the open door and the fact that random strangers were able to just walk in and join the other guys) were A+++. “Cock Cultists on Campus” was great too; I particularly love college/university settings for these types of stories. All in all, phenomenal work here and I eagerly await your future works!

7/13/23, 3:10 PM
@[jockboy51](/user/show/936451) I'm glad you liked them and enjoyed 'Everything is normal' so much! Not to disappoint but it's actually one of the few pieces I've written that I haven't planned or started a sequel for. That said, a lot of the other stories I have started do fall into the mass enslavement genre and many of them take place in the university setting.
Jul 10, 2023
7/11/23, 7:00 AM
I’ll echo the above comments! These are amazing story fragments, each hot in their own unique way. 1 and 4 definitely have the best hypnotic scenes, but I think my favorite is 3 because of how funny and clever it is! You do an amazing job sprinkling cock and masturbation jokes throughout (D.O.N.G. University, Mrs. Biggerstaff, Professor BATEman, etc.), but there’s a slightly creepy undercurrent—could it be the beginning stages of goon babble? Excellent work all around! :)

7/13/23, 3:08 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) I'm glad you picked up on D.O.N.G Uni and the other jokes haha! It isn't the start of goon babble but I wanted to create a feeling of that world, or at least the news show, as being slightly cartoonish and dumb in a way that mirrored gooning and goon captioned media.
Ab3
7/13/23, 1:56 PM
Waiting for next part eagerly... Do something of Matt.. make him a horny bitch who is readily eager to get fucked

7/13/23, 2:42 PM
@[Ab3](/user/show/10036556) Part 9 is coming!
Apr 17, 2020
7/13/23, 2:29 PM
This is so hot. Please write more.
Ab3
7/13/23, 1:40 PM
Need continuation of this story... Just imagine these 2 slowly infecting whole hostel and then they going on with college
7/13/23, 12:40 PM
Holy hopping shitfuck, that was a masterful chapter in an already masterful story. As others have said, the mirror / dissociation bit is very original and very cool.
7/10/23, 12:47 PM
Oh wow what a nice ending. But im just confuse if Mason really like Liam from the beginning or its just a side effect of the reset. Like the grandfather or something made sure the reset make Mason Bi. I mean its obv the reset affected the 4 bullies. Anyway love the open ending, but if theres spinoff or continuation, Warner better not involved Mason and Liam.

7/10/23, 1:36 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I agree. I think that another Dakhoz story should include other people. A prequel can be an interesting choice, but either way I think it's best to leave Liam and Mason's story complete, as it is now.

7/10/23, 4:04 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Sorry for the confusion! My intention was that Liam didn’t need the label maker all along and Mason was and is bisexual. Liam and Mason are complete now and their story with the label maker ends here.

7/10/23, 4:04 PM
@Reader Such good options!

7/10/23, 4:16 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Now im curious, if the reset didnt affect Mason, what about the 4 bullies? Are they the one who changed, or Liam just misinterpreted things?

7/10/23, 5:43 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Mason wasn't change; the bullies were changed. While it was a reset, it wasn't a true reset as reality now remembers Liam as a jock bodied creative writer and the bullies became tolerant.

7/11/23, 4:31 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) About Liam's body, did he get younger once again while returning his jock body, or did it still cost him his age/something else?

7/11/23, 1:35 PM
@Reader Liam got younger but kept his jock body. The cost was giving up the power of the djinn to get what he wanted. Sort of a boon if you will.

7/13/23, 7:57 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Honestly seems like he got the best of both worlds. Especially since the label maker takes away years of your life and practically kills people. That's another reason I don't want the next story to revolve around Liam and Mason, the will happy ending stay a happy ending

7/13/23, 12:27 PM
@Reader It’s part of the happy ending. That Liam got everything he wanted and more. If I do another, Liam and Mason will not be involved.