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7/13/23, 11:27 AM
Omg I need more. So good!
7/13/23, 11:24 AM
Wow! That’s a really elaborate description of a slave’s life. Nicely done.
mikegay4u
7/12/23, 11:39 PM
I think a reeking penis would be very hot. Great story.

Anonymous
7/13/23, 10:20 AM
@[mikegay4u](/user/show/451349) My brain says no, but my dick says yes. 😳
Mr. Greenwood
7/13/23, 9:48 AM
Hello ghostwriter, you have a wild imagination for sure and a gift for storytelling. I will read your story series too when I will have the time while listening to the song "happy phantom" from Tori Amos. :)
Jun 11, 2023
Mr. Greenwood
7/13/23, 9:42 AM
Hello BobbyBlobfish, your unique style definitely shines throughout your story. And I admit that it was hot to imagine a dentist like that however in real life they are mostly fierce looking bastards :D While having "zero" positive experience with any of my dentists, I enjoyed reading this one. ;)
Mr. Greenwood
7/13/23, 9:30 AM
The way you weave words together is pure magic Neiotik. Congratulations on creating such a captivating and original piece in the genre of "gay merman fiction". I want to read everything from you after this one :)
Mr. Greenwood
7/13/23, 9:21 AM
Hi Neiotik, I think you've truly captured the essence of the Slavic mythology, the Ivan Kupala night and such mysterious merman myth in your writing. Your story is so beautifully written and I liked that you chose a happy ending to it. Though if I was writing this story myself, I think it would end up really dramatic:laughing: I really enjoyed reading your story a lot as I do enjoy myths and legends so much. Plus the sensual details of the two lovers making love despite their difference was :fire: I would definitely recommend your story to those readers who like both romance and sensuality with such a measured and cultivated blend. Well done!
May 31, 2023
Mr. Greenwood
7/13/23, 8:59 AM
Wow, I'm in awe of your storytelling skills with a killer and heart wrenching twist in the end. Your story transports the reader to a horrifying underworld that any man can be kidnapped and processed for the rich to become an expensive but "disposable" sex toy. The way the story is told and the plot unravels kept me hooked until the very end. Congrats!"
7/13/23, 8:52 AM
Omg I need this app!!!
May 29, 2023
Mr. Greenwood
7/13/23, 8:46 AM
"Bravo JoshTheJock! Your story is not a bad one about training and mind control, I enjoyed it. That pervy coach is really toying with the young stud Jason and he goes "I'm not even gay":rofl:, that's hot.:fire: This could have turned into a series or maybe we may find Jason trying to show us his skills about new mediums like blogging, social media entries, phone cam recordings etc. which he would definitely fool himself more and more (I think we all want to see him getting more and more dumb with the muscle growth), only if you can craft engaging new characters just like the coach and some intricate and sexy plotlines . This could also be a challenge for you to make it much better and more juicy.