Nonstop jerking til chapter 3. I love father son and the idea of free tribes of loving men taking care of eachother and loving eachother with father and son roles. The compassion, huge cock anal stretching and the beauty the urorks had (my real life beauty standards) was amazing. I want to be taken away and be fathered and raised by a big orc in a tribe Im not into transformation but i want to be turned into an orc son the exact same way. I wanted to see orc life more and hoped for chapter 4 being all about that, daily life, acts of love, celebration, rituals, religious practices, customs, musts, superimmunity with no STDs, tribal fathers day, compartilisation: departments of cooking, woodwork, steelwork, tailoring and tanning, Responsibility of orc elders solving issues keeping peace within the entire tribe raising their own while also caring for the other orc sons in communal fashion, and in turn, a father’s day form of celebration, honouring the elders with special festivities, elegant food, beautiful sculpturs and ornemental gifts, at the end of that day, the fathers should show their love to their sons to the tribe in a gathering. Tribal scar tattoos, piercings and regular ones to pride the bond between small family units. Responsibilities given to every fathers and uncles and brothers and sons in the family unit to be good to one another and to the neighboring family units, gifting food, sex, tools, medicinal herbs and specialties to one another on random but occasions of celebration/mourning/ect. Maybe marriage parties in entire tribe to celebrate a father and son marrying? Futhermore, more familial behavior in co-parenting with several fathers in a family unit. But in grand scale the entire tribe should be a family with brothers, fathers, uncles and grandfathers, sons and grandsons. Im not into transformations, and i wouldnt mind coexisting human men in these tribes, who gains orc features like being pelted in hair and growing canines, and orc cock being huge for them but them loving it. Sorry i was still superhorny while writing this entire comment,

Omg I need more. So good!

Wow! That’s a really elaborate description of a slave’s life. Nicely done.

I think a reeking penis would be very hot. Great story.

Hello ghostwriter, you have a wild imagination for sure and a gift for storytelling. I will read your story series too when I will have the time while listening to the song "happy phantom" from Tori Amos. :)

Hello BobbyBlobfish, your unique style definitely shines throughout your story. And I admit that it was hot to imagine a dentist like that however in real life they are mostly fierce looking bastards :D While having "zero" positive experience with any of my dentists, I enjoyed reading this one. ;)

The way you weave words together is pure magic Neiotik. Congratulations on creating such a captivating and original piece in the genre of "gay merman fiction". I want to read everything from you after this one :)

Hi Neiotik, I think you've truly captured the essence of the Slavic mythology, the Ivan Kupala night and such mysterious merman myth in your writing. Your story is so beautifully written and I liked that you chose a happy ending to it. Though if I was writing this story myself, I think it would end up really dramatic:laughing: I really enjoyed reading your story a lot as I do enjoy myths and legends so much. Plus the sensual details of the two lovers making love despite their difference was :fire: I would definitely recommend your story to those readers who like both romance and sensuality with such a measured and cultivated blend. Well done!

Wow, I'm in awe of your storytelling skills with a killer and heart wrenching twist in the end. Your story transports the reader to a horrifying underworld that any man can be kidnapped and processed for the rich to become an expensive but "disposable" sex toy. The way the story is told and the plot unravels kept me hooked until the very end. Congrats!"

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