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7/11/23, 1:36 AM
I never read the Goosebumps story, or saw Mary Kate and Ashley's video, or really watched more than on background the old TZ stuff (though I've seen the movie a few times!), but...I still figured out what was happening with the first invocation. Didn't hurt the read, though, as I loved finding out what he begged to have changed next, and was excited to see how it didn't ever _quite fit_ for Kyle and Jake. So fun! You know, in a dark, horror, moralistic sort of way.
7/11/23, 1:15 AM
definitely super fun to read
7/11/23, 1:10 AM
Such an incredible story. I haven't found myself so invested in two characters so quickly, in a very long time. I hope you decide to continue their story.
Bradley David
7/11/23, 12:51 AM
Hi hypno tales. Where can I find more of your stories please because I ❤️ them
Highwayman
7/11/23, 12:27 AM
Awesome story EpochArc keep up the excellent work!
Martin
7/3/23, 7:52 PM
Fuck fuck fuck... A rubbrsome story! I don't have time to read it now, I need time and... privacy. But I'm soooo looking forward to this :)

7/3/23, 7:58 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks, Martin. I appreciate that. But dear God! I hope I can live up to your expectations. In case anybody else reads this, my motivation is to simply slow down the scene. I probably could've done it slower. But a good writer should know how to build the scene slowly. And then as the sex progresses, little by little, you should increase the pace until the characters finally succumb into an explosive climax. I just wanted to write one story ... one simple chapter ... and see if I could do exactly that. Your guys' reactions will tell me if I succeed or failed. I'd be content if I got any reader's cock hard. And a gold star if I get just one guy going to hard, that he feels compelled to jack off and cum. Please let me know ... it always makes my day knowing I got another guy to cum to my kinky ideas.

7/4/23, 2:00 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) This drone blew quite a load to it, indeed.

7/4/23, 2:44 AM
@[Drone KD-2039](/user/show/2919803) Success! Thank you for your comment. Hopefully one day you're converted for the cause.

7/11/23, 12:04 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) It sure hopes to be able to take the place of the Subject one day. Until then it shall return to this story ever so often and spill more of its seed.
7/11/23, 12:01 AM
So, huh. Until I read the comments, I thought this was a cautionary tale (well, fake, because it's hot); what if you could change anything about yourself, and then figured out you could change _everything_ about yourself? And that power was in two peoples' hands? And the changes reflected retroactively in reality? If that was the case, then your new personality and life would reflect upon the changes you'd make, like continuously compounding interest. But all of that falls apart right at the end, where this becomes a cautionary tale of ...one man taking over another's life, by taking away their mental capacity for making their own choices. Which is so, so much darker. And it was Ethan who upped his own narcissism, wasn't it? I really feel that should have been Sam, as it would have allowed him the sociopathy to make it All About Him. And that latter "cautionary tale" is certainly right within The Twilight Zone's wheelhouse, for sure, but I was digging the repercussions for the geometric progression of Sam and Ethan's mutual changes. Okay. I've obsessed over this hot little bit of erotica a touch too much now, I think. I loved the story. But like any good TZ piece, it got me thinking.
Jul 10, 2023
Anonymous
7/10/23, 10:09 PM
Loved all of these snippets but the first and last one were my favorites. Hope to see these turn into full stories!
rodjock
7/10/23, 7:04 PM
This was hot and a good second chapter! My one point would be that it is too fast paced. You have an incredible background story and I believe adding more details and slowing the progression would improve the story, especially in climactic sections like the initial brainwashing.

7/10/23, 9:17 PM
@rodjock Yeah, that's fair. I thought about that when I was writing it, but I also really only covered the start of it. The men were all still in the chambers when Tate left, so I was trying to imply they are left there for a while. But I understand what you mean.
Jul 10, 2023
Anonymous
7/10/23, 9:07 PM
The first one with the blue spiral was my favorite. So hot. I just love resistance