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Jul 10, 2023
Anonymous
7/10/23, 10:09 PM
Loved all of these snippets but the first and last one were my favorites. Hope to see these turn into full stories!
rodjock
7/10/23, 7:04 PM
This was hot and a good second chapter! My one point would be that it is too fast paced. You have an incredible background story and I believe adding more details and slowing the progression would improve the story, especially in climactic sections like the initial brainwashing.

7/10/23, 9:17 PM
@rodjock Yeah, that's fair. I thought about that when I was writing it, but I also really only covered the start of it. The men were all still in the chambers when Tate left, so I was trying to imply they are left there for a while. But I understand what you mean.
Jul 10, 2023
Anonymous
7/10/23, 9:07 PM
The first one with the blue spiral was my favorite. So hot. I just love resistance
Jay
7/10/23, 8:51 PM
Really liked the bitched-by-the-kid part. That's the domination aspect that's the hottest. The rest of the sex is good too, as always!
Jay
7/10/23, 8:49 PM
Loved see Sammy show off John and Eli as his bitches after what they'd done in the previous chapter. Dungeon scene with Rachel was very well done, much hotter than most bi sex! Excellent porn, but the lesson that we're happier when we can be what we are is definitely true IRL as well.
Anonymous
7/10/23, 8:43 PM
omg can’t wait for the next update I love this series
Anonymous
7/10/23, 7:01 PM
Great continuation to the story!
7/10/23, 5:56 PM
Great story. Sexy, erotic and well written.
7/10/23, 4:32 PM
¡Gran comienzo!
7/9/23, 12:45 PM
Loved this story. It has all the elements of a superhero takedown I love. Wanted Glen to turn Caleb back into his pretty boy self, but that's just a me thing. Loved the massive evolution of the subduers powers after draining Azure. I wish that the subduer sent Caleb back in his Azure uniform to further mock his powerlessness. Also, would love a side story of watching other heroes try to fight the Subduer and fail! Maybe a detailed description of how they felt during the power drain?

7/9/23, 3:02 PM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) Thank you! I like the idea of Caleb being forced to wear his costume again, maybe he should have had it hidden beneath his clothes when he was sent to Glen. That said, you can be sure that Glen will have made him wear an 'Azure Defender' costume at some point after owning him; a cheap, tacky knock-off of his old one, just to drive things home. Also, yeah, I'll consider a side story like that. I'd certainly like to play around with the power-draining process some more ;)

7/10/23, 4:04 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Yesss I love power drain stories! There's something so erotic about a hero losing his powers, yet still trying to hold on to his heroic personality and where they go from there. Also, how the villain uses the hero's powers to continue to bring other heroes low. At a certain point, what does the villain do with all the power? What happens when he fully assembles the harem? Do the heroes stay slaves, or do they become something more, such a polyamorous family?