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Anonymous
5/13/25, 8:16 PM
I love this story. Unfortunately this isn’t finished
May 13, 2025
5/13/25, 8:27 PM
I think first and foremost, I really enjoyed the quality and creativity of your writing. There are a few kinky elements that really tapped into my brain, too. There is definitely a level of fucked-upped-ness, yeah, but I can appreciate that you just went for it, even if not everything was my personal cup of tea. Kudos!
Anonymous
5/13/25, 8:45 PM
One day I would love to read an anthology series that shows how Master Jake managed to do this. Some stuff is clearly implied but still, it would be really cool to see how Master Jake created this society, Richie’s society, KJ’s society, and several others.

5/14/25, 3:59 PM
@Anonymous I am glad you are excited. I’ve had lots of requests for this and I’m finally at a place where I can start writing this story this summer. Info will be posted in my discord and on my patreon, with there being a split between free and early release material.
May 13, 2025
5/13/25, 10:04 PM
This was so, so, so hot. I love the boy/dad dynamic and the stepford preppy stuff. Only thing I'm not mad on is the 'girl' stuff. Super creative story, great to see you back writing!!!
5/13/25, 10:08 PM
One of my new favorites!!!
Jan 20, 2007
Jai
5/13/25, 11:57 PM
This classic, one of the best
5/14/25, 12:43 AM
I agree with all the other commenters - very hot story! I really enjoyed the premise, topical yet original. The mindfuckiness of it was only supplanted with how much of an eager slut _Hunted_ became for Alex, and Alex turning into how others saw Hunter served to be a great perspective shift. Good work!

5/14/25, 1:31 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) 🙏🙏 I appreciate that soo much , thank you buddy , the more I think about it the more ideas I have for a continuation , the only thing is I think I would have to switch the perspective as surely Hunted would be too dumb to continue to tell the story 🤣🤣🤣🤣
5/14/25, 3:38 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVE your stories. Hands down one of the best writers on this site. I would be genuinely surprised if you said you weren't already a published novelist. That said, The only small complaint I have is that your series here... they never get finished :open_mouth:
May 8, 2025
5/14/25, 3:45 AM
Thank you for sharing this amazing story and pushing me over the edge. It hit a lot of my kinks. I want to convert my boy like this.

5/14/25, 4:30 AM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) That is a very high compliment! :D I would also love to be converted like this... alas, for now I'll just have to keep imagining it. Thank you so much for reading! 🖤
May 13, 2025
5/14/25, 4:51 AM
Excellent