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7/10/23, 6:08 AM
Loved the read a lil sad that they didnt use all 4 bullies together at the time before the end but the ending was super sweet and I liked it.

7/10/23, 6:14 AM
@[Zurich](/user/show/907804) Having the four bullies being used before the end didn’t occur to me! That’s a good idea to maybe use in the future.
7/10/23, 4:38 AM
I'm glad that Liam and Mason end up together without help from any magical being. I hope we.get to see more of Dakhoz in the future.

7/10/23, 5:45 AM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Glad you liked it. Dakhoz May return.
7/10/23, 4:55 AM
What a fantastic chapter. I'm usually the type who tells themselves they appreciate good writing and then ends up skipping through the dialogue to get to the smut, but these narrative interludes were so charming and the exploration of djinn is so interesting that I found myself reading the entire thing. This series is a credit to the genre and I'm really looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing your work!
7/10/23, 3:34 AM
Fuc'n A,m8, We need more !!! Continue Series !!!
7/10/23, 3:22 AM
A very sweet ending.

7/10/23, 3:30 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Glad you liked it.
7/10/23, 3:15 AM
This was good but it was short. I would have liked to have seen some more info shown. Like you said Luke is fed up with his roommate for being effeminate but you never show the roommate doing anything effeminate. If you had, you could have then shown him becoming a different person cuz his behavior would have changed as the M-Fuel changed him. I would also liked to have seen Luke at first liking his new roommate's bigger muscles and dumb jock behavior, but as the changes continue and get more extreme he doesn't like it... maybe he's actually horrified by it... and he'll be even more horrified when he realizes that his roommate is changing him into the same thing. Just some ideas.
7/10/23, 3:07 AM
I liked this story a whole lot. My only complaint was that it didn't continue on and on cuz it was so good.
7/10/23, 2:32 AM
Great story, I love the DnD-esque fantasy scenario and it was a very simple but effective start to presenting the story. I would love to see and know more about the wizard's toys, as well as knowing the fate of the two bandits.

7/10/23, 2:43 AM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Thank you. This was a lot of fun to write and I think I'll be adding another chapter at some point.
Anonymous
7/10/23, 1:40 AM
J'ai adoré
Dec 23, 2018
7/10/23, 12:48 AM
This was darkly and beautifully written. Erotic horror at its finest. My only complaint is that it concluded.