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7/10/23, 3:15 AM
This was good but it was short. I would have liked to have seen some more info shown. Like you said Luke is fed up with his roommate for being effeminate but you never show the roommate doing anything effeminate. If you had, you could have then shown him becoming a different person cuz his behavior would have changed as the M-Fuel changed him. I would also liked to have seen Luke at first liking his new roommate's bigger muscles and dumb jock behavior, but as the changes continue and get more extreme he doesn't like it... maybe he's actually horrified by it... and he'll be even more horrified when he realizes that his roommate is changing him into the same thing. Just some ideas.
7/10/23, 3:07 AM
I liked this story a whole lot. My only complaint was that it didn't continue on and on cuz it was so good.
7/10/23, 2:32 AM
Great story, I love the DnD-esque fantasy scenario and it was a very simple but effective start to presenting the story. I would love to see and know more about the wizard's toys, as well as knowing the fate of the two bandits.

7/10/23, 2:43 AM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Thank you. This was a lot of fun to write and I think I'll be adding another chapter at some point.
Anonymous
7/10/23, 1:40 AM
J'ai adoré
Dec 23, 2018
7/10/23, 12:48 AM
This was darkly and beautifully written. Erotic horror at its finest. My only complaint is that it concluded.
7/10/23, 12:06 AM
Wow, wow, wow. The worldbuilding, the djinn dialogue, the hot hot tension between them, the emotional tenderness... This is a standout series. Thanks very much for sharing your work.
7/9/23, 11:20 PM
A very hot story. I hope there is more!
7/9/23, 11:13 PM
This is nuanced, hot, and intriguing. I would love to see more. Thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
7/9/23, 9:07 PM
Every time I read a Blazargus story my brain bounces between "What kind of sick fuck gets off to stuff like this?!" and "Me, I'm that sick fuck, this is the hottest thing I've ever read" and this one doesn't disappoint. ~~I'm not sure if~~ I even want to know what those head slug things were doing(aside from creating a vague facsimile of a gimp/drone hood). Oh, and I wholeheartedly second the idea of exploring the power draining process further! Maybe you could frame it as Glen passing some exclusive intel to a group of would-be liberators to give them an edge against **The Subduer**, but he "accidentally" neglects a key detail that leads to their downfall. :wink:

7/9/23, 10:33 PM
@Anonymous Every time I read a comment like this my brain goes "Oh, look! Another sick fuck. Glad I'm not the only one!" I'd love to give you some firsthand experience with the head-slugs,... but for now, I suppose I'll just have to get writing instead.
Sep 1, 2014
jay
7/9/23, 10:08 PM
i wis you would continue this so bad it has potental to be a great series