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5/14/25, 8:13 AM
So? Will Trent join the fag's squad? Maybe they'll go on patrol together after some proper training

5/14/25, 1:16 PM
@[Xmale06](/user/show/10053174) You'll definitely be seeing more of him in the future.
5/14/25, 11:45 AM
The sex was incredible... but the character development you write... its AMAZING. I loved it.

5/14/25, 1:13 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Tried my best and I’m so glad it resonated with you. Spoiler alert: there’s one bonus chapter coming about Logan. 😉
5/14/25, 12:17 PM
Can't believe it took me this many years to discover this story. Really hope you continue the depraved water sports fun for Dear Sean.
5/14/25, 2:20 PM
I really hope that you can continue the story!
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5/14/25, 3:00 PM
Great work
5/14/25, 3:25 PM
The power extraction part is so good. The dialogues on that part really keep me reading.

5/14/25, 10:06 PM
@[Hero25](/user/show/10051875) Thank you! There may still be more to come there,... :3
5/14/25, 4:52 PM
What a good way to start my day with a new chapter! And what a way to look at yourself in the mirror and become what you see. Or to be how others see you. How the power of choice can be so transforming. Even when the perception of choice is skewed by an external influence. And the stark contrasts between Red and Green couldn't exemplify this better. Their inner monologues demonstrate that perception and use of choice just as loudly as their actions did. It was a relief to see Red pull himself together. And from his 'choice,' Hank has received something more valuable then what he had last time. Someone who truly summitted himself to become what he now his. And the level of loyalty and dedication he will give Hank will not fade. I suspect that Yellow will follow a similar path. He wants to be prove his worth and ability. So this is how Hank plans to reward his workforce? The ability to remake themselves into their own mental image by injecting themselves with nanites. Yet I feel like there is a catch that has yet to come into play. For how else could Hank control them afterwards? Why would Hank freely give away not only multiple powers from heroes; but also the ability to mimic anything in their database without a 'failsafe'? I assume that is why Hanks is putting on this display of theatrics and transformation. Getting everyone drunk on power and emotions they don't realize the well is poisoned.

5/14/25, 10:13 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Are you saying that Hank _isn't_ just a drama queen? Haha! No, you're right,... Hank isn't someone who would normally stoop to playing to a crowd. He certainly has his own intentions, even if **H-3** is having trouble working them out. And **Yellow**,...? Let's just say there's a reason I had to drop his part from this chapter and move it into the next,... Glad you enjoyed Red's journey through this chapter. He's certainly happier than he was going in! Thanks ;)

5/15/25, 1:28 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Your welcome, yet I realize I was partly mistaken. Hank has experienced this level of submission before in the final 'bad ending' (and personally I still view as the true ending). With Nick fully and willingly submitting himself to Hank. To not need any brainwashing. To have those commit and submit themselves to another is the ultimate rite. And this is largely what Red repeated. And what I suspect Yellow will do too. No need for him to be the sexual release anymore with Green being a literal toy. But he is really sold on doing whatever his 'duty' is. So maybe a drone? A soldier? Have him infiltrate and sabotage?

5/15/25, 2:45 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) You're almost on the right track with Yellow, but you might have to wait and see to find out exactly what his part will be. Despite what **H-3** might think, Hank wasn't just chatting to the workers for fun,...
5/14/25, 5:05 PM
I am total agreement with Glennyboi: that chapter was really hot!! :hot_face: The drugged cake was an inspired choice. What better way to subdue the twins on their birthday than by putting something in their birthday cake? And Zach's power over Kai was the perfect way to re-capture him, taking advantage of his guilt over leaving Will behind (even though Will was right there to be part of the capture). So how will Octavius Fiend use the powers that he extracted from the twins? And what is that power? As always I am already looking forward to the next chapter. I'm so glad you're back to writing, SleepyAsh! Thanks for sharing your amazing writing with the group!! :smiley:

5/17/25, 6:13 PM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) A sort of drugged desert is something I've wanted to include for some time! It's very good to be back, and once again sorry for the long absence! Next chapter is already pending approval :grin:

5/17/25, 6:57 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Ooooooo can’t wait 🥵

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5/18/25, 3:24 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Awesome! Can’t wait to read it! 😃
5/14/25, 5:34 PM
Brother, this was a beautiful, satisfying, and complete ending to an epic journey. Thank you for letting us into your pack and sharing your world with us. I’m so happy Luna brought you into my orbit and that you chose to dance with her when it would have been easier to give up. I can’t wait to see what more she holds in store for you and us! You’re the best ♥️

5/15/25, 4:54 AM
@[Furrybttm40](/user/show/10010813) Thank you for the kind words and encouragement. Very pleased that some folks enjoyed the entire ride.
5/14/25, 5:56 PM
Somehow missed this when it first came out. I hope this gets continued at some point