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7/9/23, 2:03 PM
I really like the narrator's corruption toward the end. To me, it's actually a lot hotter to read about a regular guy's corruption rather than a superhero's corruption.

7/9/23, 2:49 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Glad you liked that part! I'm greedy and like a bit of both :3
7/9/23, 2:38 PM
I'd love to hear more on this storyline. Perhaps what he does for the rest of the team?
7/9/23, 8:13 AM
Awesome new chapter! I love how you've put some genuine humanity into the characters (Daniel feeling lost without his twin to hang out with particularly stands out)--yes, the descriptions of everyone getting plumper is hot, but it's also fun to see character development and connect with the people we're reading about. Also love how you show the addictive quality of the food through Carlos, and how just a few bites is enough to get people hooked--and hungry. ;p Can't wait to see the guys continue to get fatter and lazier!

7/9/23, 1:38 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Aw thanks this comment really made my day, I’m happy to hear you like it. Get ready for more of them moving forward šŸ’š
7/8/23, 10:24 PM
The transformations have begun!

7/9/23, 1:36 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) We only grow from here 🄳
7/9/23, 1:28 PM
No idea why this is comment-free, as this chapter specifically is one of the hottest bits of erotica on the site. The story itself is pretty classic hypnosis mind-control, but the scene here is white-hot!
sissymalcolm
7/9/23, 12:33 PM
I want to have a daddy like this, to be regressed to a sissy lil girl and used for his pleasure
Anonymous
7/9/23, 12:31 PM
Loved your story your skills are amazing man šŸ˜ keep going
7/9/23, 11:23 AM
This is so hot. The teasing works both ways, to tease Clark, and us readers. Cant wait to read more of it.
7/9/23, 6:53 AM
I'm a new author here, and I've just discovered your story. I've particularly enjoyed it so far. It's very pleasant to read, fluid, with enough detail to allow readers to visualize the characters and scenes and thus project themselves into one of the characters. I, of course, am JD. I also like the idea of this physical, but also mental transformation under the effect of molecules resulting from a doctor's research, which makes the story more plausible, and for me more exciting. I'm lucky compared to other readers and commentators here, I don't have to wait for the sequel. So, Felicition for now. And keep writing stories, you have a real talent. 😁
John
7/9/23, 5:12 AM
So freaking hot, not just the the interaction between Coach and Victor but the internal thoughts and monologue of Coach is incredible, the way the experience is changing him and he is ( I do not knoe how to put it in words) but just realizing what this means for him and this is potentially can be something more for him!