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7/9/23, 11:23 AM
This is so hot. The teasing works both ways, to tease Clark, and us readers. Cant wait to read more of it.
7/9/23, 6:53 AM
I'm a new author here, and I've just discovered your story. I've particularly enjoyed it so far. It's very pleasant to read, fluid, with enough detail to allow readers to visualize the characters and scenes and thus project themselves into one of the characters. I, of course, am JD. I also like the idea of this physical, but also mental transformation under the effect of molecules resulting from a doctor's research, which makes the story more plausible, and for me more exciting. I'm lucky compared to other readers and commentators here, I don't have to wait for the sequel. So, Felicition for now. And keep writing stories, you have a real talent. 😁
John
7/9/23, 5:12 AM
So freaking hot, not just the the interaction between Coach and Victor but the internal thoughts and monologue of Coach is incredible, the way the experience is changing him and he is ( I do not knoe how to put it in words) but just realizing what this means for him and this is potentially can be something more for him!
7/9/23, 4:24 AM
(and I do get that it's going to be an anthology, so maybe no more Patrick and Sean, but you certainly left plenty of room to expand that individual story if you want.)

7/9/23, 4:26 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I am actually working on the next part of this story... I'll just hold off on posting Fracture: Remanufactured for a little while. The catch is that while I had the main story segments plotted out well in advance continuing this wasn't really on my agenda but it's been pretty popular.
7/9/23, 4:21 AM
Oh, this is filled with so much damn promise. It's intricately plotted, a delightful slow burn, and hits so many of my own erotic buttons. I dearly hope you keep going with this. You'll have at least one guaranteed reader!
7/9/23, 3:40 AM
I’m ready for more!!! Please continue!!!!
7/9/23, 3:16 AM
Cigar hypno stories are absolutely up there on my fav list, but I hardly ever see any, so thank you so much for this one~ It was really well done~ My only criticism is a just a personal preference; I would have loved to see a role reversal, maybe using the powder wrong and accidentally turning the dad into the son's submissive cigar muscle slut and the son realizing he's actually more into being a rough cigar dom~ Anyways, I hope to see more cigar hypno stories from you in the future~
7/7/23, 3:40 PM
hot as fuck bro

7/9/23, 3:05 AM
@[ScallyPunk](/user/show/1105909) Thanks!
7/9/23, 2:37 AM
Great premise.
7/9/23, 1:30 AM
What are you Jack? You reach us all at our core and lead us to where we belong, superiors and inferiors alike. You know the truth, yiu write the truth and you lead us the the truth. And wrap it up in a world of omyour own imagining that is ever more layered and compelling. As a 6 ft 4 jock w grades, looks and social skills I knew what it was like to get pigeon holed. I saw me in Maverick's explaining shit to Pete. Spot on. Anyways thank you for writing.

7/9/23, 1:34 AM
@[Currious](/user/show/10009075) Yeah I was in the same boat, so a lot of Maverick says is truth.