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7/9/23, 4:24 AM
(and I do get that it's going to be an anthology, so maybe no more Patrick and Sean, but you certainly left plenty of room to expand that individual story if you want.)

7/9/23, 4:26 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I am actually working on the next part of this story... I'll just hold off on posting Fracture: Remanufactured for a little while. The catch is that while I had the main story segments plotted out well in advance continuing this wasn't really on my agenda but it's been pretty popular.
7/9/23, 4:21 AM
Oh, this is filled with so much damn promise. It's intricately plotted, a delightful slow burn, and hits so many of my own erotic buttons. I dearly hope you keep going with this. You'll have at least one guaranteed reader!
7/9/23, 3:40 AM
I’m ready for more!!! Please continue!!!!
7/9/23, 3:16 AM
Cigar hypno stories are absolutely up there on my fav list, but I hardly ever see any, so thank you so much for this one~ It was really well done~ My only criticism is a just a personal preference; I would have loved to see a role reversal, maybe using the powder wrong and accidentally turning the dad into the son's submissive cigar muscle slut and the son realizing he's actually more into being a rough cigar dom~ Anyways, I hope to see more cigar hypno stories from you in the future~
7/7/23, 3:40 PM
hot as fuck bro

7/9/23, 3:05 AM
@[ScallyPunk](/user/show/1105909) Thanks!
7/9/23, 2:37 AM
Great premise.
7/9/23, 1:30 AM
What are you Jack? You reach us all at our core and lead us to where we belong, superiors and inferiors alike. You know the truth, yiu write the truth and you lead us the the truth. And wrap it up in a world of omyour own imagining that is ever more layered and compelling. As a 6 ft 4 jock w grades, looks and social skills I knew what it was like to get pigeon holed. I saw me in Maverick's explaining shit to Pete. Spot on. Anyways thank you for writing.

7/9/23, 1:34 AM
@[Currious](/user/show/10009075) Yeah I was in the same boat, so a lot of Maverick says is truth.
7/5/23, 5:39 PM
WB: "Yes! More horniness! More brainpower! More science!" Diego: "I need to build something, first!" WB: *sigh* "Fiiiiiine."

7/9/23, 12:23 AM
@[DBar](/user/show/1069522) Thanks for reading! Hopefully WB and Diego will be able to come to an understanding.
3/11/19, 5:23 PM
Hey! Thank you very much to both of you. Both, my friend and I, are very proud and grateful for the feedback, comments as yours encourage us a lot. Thank you! I was afraid that my interventions (Kaa) were not understandable in English. My friend helps me but my English level is not perfect. We will publish new chapters soon :)

Seymour@toxygenneeder
7/8/23, 11:46 PM
@[Hypno-Tales](/user/show/70383) Your story’s are so good. I also need more stories as well. Amazing and read it to the end. Some positives, amazing story, need more.!

7/8/23, 11:51 PM
@Seymour@toxygenneeder Thank yoooooouuuuu so muuuuch :3 comments like that encourage me to write more x3 thanks :)
3/27/22, 12:17 PM
Fetish-wise, this story couldn't turn me off more. This is the kind of stuff I'd feel terrified about when it comes to hypnosis, especially when he had to give in all his bank and SS info. Yet, I couldn't help but comment because this was _fantastically_ well-written and designed. Everything flows smoothly and the last paragraph was brilliant. Your ability to mix descriptions with the flow, and make nothing sound repetitive nor fast-paced is something to envy. Keep up the good work, man. You have loads of talent.

3/28/22, 12:42 AM
@Twan Andersen Thanks for the kind words! Means even more knowing I kept pulling you along even if it wasn't a turn-on. I think a lot of this fantasy plays along the line of our fears, so one person's "too far" may be another's "just right." Hopefully some of my other stuff will be more up your alley - but thanks for reading anyhow!

4/30/23, 6:36 AM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) Agree with Twan. In this story you're abandoned the hypnosis and control aspects to cross some real fear lines for most of your readers. I was trained in therapeutic hypnosis some forty years ago and have never tried the stage version, although I've had some fun with a few people. I enjoy your writing;' your talent is far beyond the typical author on sites of this kind. In my own fiction I've used covert hypnosis occasionally woven into the plot, mostly based on my own experiences. I'd like to explore story ideas with you some time. You can find me on Amazon and at my eponymous website.

7/8/23, 9:30 PM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) Would you ever write a part 3

7/8/23, 11:48 PM
@[Hdhshs](/user/show/2696590) Maybe some day!