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7/8/23, 5:48 AM
I really enjoyed being able to experience the conversion process from the perspective of the converter. Wish there were more stories like this.
7/8/23, 5:00 AM
I don't know exactly why this tickled me so much, but > “So, did you eat the banana?” Dan asked, hopefully Really hit my funny bone hard. The rest was just as humorous and really, really hot!
Tim M
7/8/23, 4:43 AM
Very hot story!! Can’t wait for the next part!!!!
7/8/23, 3:12 AM
Jack, you have done it again. Pete is finding his way. Now let's see how Sammy fits in to this duo?
7/7/23, 6:45 PM
god I am so scared.... I hope Matt wont do anything to Andy and make him no longer love Dan ._.

7/8/23, 3:06 AM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) Keep holding on to that hope, it could be very useful. Their story has a ways to go yet... all of them.
7/8/23, 3:02 AM
Take a pause, Take a breath. Try to slow down. I agree that this seems like it could be a really good story and concept. You have a lot of potential here and often I found myself rushing stories in the beginning too. I hope you keep writing and working on your craft. You're gonna knock it out of the park next time.
7/8/23, 2:26 AM
This scratches the itch I didn't know I need. * Clap Clap Clap*. Bravo.
7/7/23, 10:42 PM
Great stuff! Hope to read more from you!

7/8/23, 1:33 AM
@[GiantBoyGenius](/user/show/908056) Thank you! I hope to write more :)
Lampshade15
7/8/23, 1:15 AM
Superb story, really good for a first publish!

7/8/23, 1:18 AM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Thank you! I was worried about the length. I was very observant about not having too much "fat" in the story and only have information that was necessary
7/7/23, 11:19 PM
Maybe dad gets an ad for the hypno powder and makes stephen his ideal boi?

Lampshade15
7/8/23, 1:15 AM
@[fleed412](/user/show/1031132) I like the sound of this