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3/20/26, 6:27 PM
Always enjoy orc transformation stories. This is a good one so far. I would just remind you to spell check, as a rule. Not a lot of errors here, but I did see some easily avoided mistakes. You also don't need to say "the Gromnar" etc. Don't take this as me being mean, if I somehow come across that way. I really do want to see how this all progresses.
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3/21/26, 12:12 AM
@[BigBroWolf](/user/show/10001489) Really appreciate the constructive feedback. It helped be catch a bunch of mistakes. Hopefuly it means I can minimise the issue in future now.

3/21/26, 8:02 AM
@[Somnos](/user/show/10072006) Oh I sometimes find mistakes weeks later in my own stuff. Just figured it would be best to mention it.
3/21/26, 7:07 AM
one of my all-time favorite stories on this site (or any site) - delighted to see a new chapter!
Domslutinbriefs
3/21/26, 6:11 AM
Super interesting dynamic and characters ! It’s pretty cool to have both their point of view on their past.
Anonymous
3/21/26, 3:37 AM
Nice work.
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3/21/26, 2:09 AM
Completely unrelated to this chapter, but whatever happened to Jamie's non-super friends that got turned into drones way back in like part 4 I think? I wonder if they'll be reunited now that Jamie is finally with the Master.

3/21/26, 2:26 AM
@[phillipsm](/user/show/919402) DT-163 has made a few appearances, but we haven't seen any more of DP-071, f/k/a Jack. And hopefully, you're right.
3/21/26, 1:32 AM
I love the slow transformation of Derrek, and his memories slowly changing to maybe love? I can’t wait for the rest of the party finding them with a weeks worth of orc musk.
3/21/26, 1:10 AM
Really hot story 🐽🥵🤤. Kinda curious if New Brock and Tyler get up to any bother stuff and curious if Tyler likes his brothers musk 🐽🐽🐽🐽. Also curious if old Brock finds a hung gym guy to keep that hole satisfied 🥵🥵🐽🐽.
3/20/26, 1:22 PM
Your writing is so well done and your story flows very well. Really enjoy your description of the transformation, as well as the mental changes that are taking place. Excited to see where the next chapters go and whether Derrek registers anything thats happening to him or if he's already too far gone.
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3/21/26, 12:15 AM
@[Meh21342134](/user/show/10059646) Derrek's a smart guy, I think he'll notice something's going on. Er, _was_ a smart guy...hrm...
3/21/26, 12:11 AM
I'm excited to read more of Derrek's physical and mental changes. Like, I wonder how he will talk once he's fully become an orc.
3/20/26, 1:37 PM
I'm super excited for Derrek's mental changes. Losing his old memories(or slightly altered) and obliviously forming new habits might be exactly what pushes him and Grom to become brother-mates! And yeah, he needs a badass new orc name ASAP!

3/21/26, 12:07 AM
@[Otakunojeo](/user/show/240693) Good guess on the name. Yeah, Gromnar probably wasn't born with his current name so you might be on to something...