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10/30/25, 9:36 AM
Oh this is fucked up. I love it.

10/30/25, 10:20 AM
@[Boomer-1](/user/show/10007241) Thanks. Something appropriately unsettling seemed appropriate for Halloween 😈
10/30/25, 8:37 AM
One of my favorites stories here so i'm really looking forward for more of these ! (Exceptional work you've done)
10/29/25, 5:28 AM
I think this was the hottest chapter yet! I'm loving it! I'm just a little sad because it seems like this story is coming to an end. I hope Tommy, Jeff, and Doug explore some scenarios and kinks before the final conclusion. I would love to read about Tommy getting fucked by his father and his "uncle"! And I hope the origin of those magic underwear is revealed before the end. I'm so curious to know how those underwear gained the ability to transform whoever holds them into a copy of Doug.

10/30/25, 5:23 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Thanks Gatuno! We will definitely get to explore some three way dynamics, so don’t worry! I didn’t have a set ending in mind when I started this, so I don’t know when it will end. Definitely not next chapter though!
10/29/25, 2:21 AM
Im reloading this page everyday with hope of seeing more of this story, this is do hot

10/30/25, 5:21 AM
@[Ruperstiltskin](/user/show/10029547) Thank you! I’m excited about the next chapter so I’m hoping to get it out as soon as I can!
10/30/25, 4:59 AM
Absolutely banger of a tale…so far! Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you!
10/30/25, 4:00 AM
Hot mind control and body control story
10/30/25, 2:47 AM
The first part was hot. Then you left me slightly anxious with the cliff hanger. Ready for the last chapter. Hoping you bring back Tyler's mind control ability.
10/30/25, 12:44 AM
This was masterful. Funny, with twists and turns, and VIVID. I felt like I was there! I was in Zack's head the whole time. I felt the pain in his stilettos and the orgiastic relief when Chad removed them. God. So good.

10/30/25, 1:40 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you for the kind words! Yes, I really wanted Zach's personality to shine through his little quips and the descriptions as the world turned increasingly nonsensical around him. It was a lot of fun to write! I'm glad you enjoyed!
10/29/25, 9:14 PM
I am curious about who inspired this story.
Oct 29, 2025
10/29/25, 9:06 PM
Great chapter 1. I do hope you can write more.