Recent Comments

7/7/23, 8:36 AM
Much that I'm enjoying the concepts here, and your writing style, the callous bullying of Dan and Andy is starting to get a little triggering. Thanks for the story so far, but I think this is my stop! Good luck with the rest of the journey. M.
7/7/23, 8:23 AM
That was an excellent start loaded with so much promise of what’s to come! Really looking forward to seeing the next part!
Anonymous
7/7/23, 6:50 AM
I have a bad feeling that Jon should've been more careful about what he wishes for. Especially about the love part.
PotatoSlices
7/7/23, 3:26 AM
I'll be honest: compared to the first part, this is a hit-or-miss for me. Maybe the tone shift did it, or maybe it's the long-winded altercation at the end. Maybe I just don't like role-reversal and am just finding that out. Regardless, it is nice to see this continued. So, angels have been added to the mix. This should be interesting.
EJG
7/7/23, 3:23 AM
Where was the reality change?.if there was,maybe Damien could share his brothers bitch? Regardless,good cashmaster story.
7/7/23, 2:42 AM
I'm so excited for this story!

7/7/23, 3:13 AM
@[HexFactor666](/user/show/809390) I’ll try to get the next part up this weekend!
7/6/23, 12:31 PM
Very hot start!! Love a good cuckold story!

7/7/23, 3:13 AM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) Stay tuned! Hopefully it’ll be getting much hotter!
7/7/23, 2:43 AM
I wasn't logged in. Sorry. The Anonymous above is the author, PupScout
7/6/23, 7:10 PM
I really loved this through to the end. It has a sweetness to it I so rarely find in our kind of erotica, and a wistfulness too. My own personal preference would be to know a little more about the origins of the house and how the magic is happening, but...maybe it's better left a mystery, in the end.

7/7/23, 2:43 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'm so happy that you enjoyed the series all the way and found the sweet touch to your liking. The origins of the house and the power that lets them have their respite, and trade off intelligence is a mystery. I'm also in two minds about whether to explore that secret or leave it hidden among the himbo manor boys. Thanks so much for reading and posting your thoughts.
5/1/20, 5:22 PM
meh, it was hot until he 'became a being of pure semen' thats just dumb, couldnt you have made em all jus more muscular or hairy or have their dicks grow?

7/7/23, 2:34 AM
@[rectoplasm](/user/show/1192773) Agreed

Anonymous
7/7/23, 2:42 AM
@[OneLuckyGuy89](/user/show/1378624) It's funny how serendipity works. I was thinking about this story this morning for no particular reason. One actual thought was, "the turning them into semen creatures was stupid but the story seemed popular enough. " And then poof, your comment appeared tonight. The semen beings was not my finest hour. I got a bit lost and well, semen beings it was. :milk_glass: