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7/6/23, 6:58 PM
I already cannot wait to read the next chapter of this
7/6/23, 1:48 PM
I love the mystery, I love the slow burn, but most of all, I love the mood you seem to effortlessly set with your talented writing. And it's low-key very arousing to boot!

7/6/23, 6:17 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you! I am grateful for your taking time to comment and I'm delighted you are enjoying the story. I hope you continue to. Such a kind message, thanks.
7/6/23, 6:04 PM
This is such a great story so far. Great job
7/6/23, 3:29 PM
I am really really sad for Dan... Truth is I love reading your story but it also makes me feel things :D Truly hope it will turn to the better for Dan and Andy... and that the other guys get a taste of their own medicin

7/6/23, 5:04 PM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) I'm glad you are enjoying it, It certainly has made me feel things writing it. Spoiler, this is a longer tale than I usually post. And a lot happens. :sweat_smile:

7/6/23, 5:34 PM
@[NANOwriter](/user/show/73689) AWESOME! Looking forward to it :) The last story that I was so invested in was probably the "Two Tops make a bottom"
7/6/23, 5:21 PM
Ab3 huge thanks for your kind comments - I had thought this story had sunk without trace. My plans for the next chapter involve dinner party for two daddies both with remote control lads, Finn recovers a bit and takes himself and the remote control unit (evidence) down to the local police station, gloop capsule starts running out, time for the Doctor to fill it up again. Hope that will satisfy for now!
7/6/23, 4:09 PM
You go this chapter out with impressive speed! And it also answered my question on how they could be altered from their need for rubber. Those two are definitely in for a wild ride as they change.
7/6/23, 3:43 PM
Omg I love this story so much
Jun 21, 2007
mic
7/6/23, 2:12 PM
fucking hot story and ideas, love it, please more bro pussies, tattooed tricked fucked, more showering together, no pain no gain , and shit that his jock friends are so dumb and dont fuck him too after tattoo. please tattoo more fags
Zander
7/2/23, 10:38 PM
The story is great, but I don't think he can outsmart the Foundation. The SCP Foundation will eventually win (because it is a very powerful organization) and have dealt with gods, demons and other monsters for centuries. The Foundation has many powerful artifacts and people (creatures) that can easily deal with Daniel and it is unlikely that his ability to control the mind and part of reality will help him.++ don't forget Chaos Insurgency, GOC, etc.

Lucas
7/3/23, 12:38 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) This story is inspired by the SCP Foundation, but I’ve made sure not to say that it’s supposed to be set in their universe. The organization that Simon is up against is only a stand-in. And if you haven’t read the original SCP-3088, you totally should! (it’s a personal fav) The organization doesn’t lose, but it definitely doesn’t “win” either. Maybe you’ll get some ideas on where I’m gonna take this story :D Thanks for the comment! Hope I didn’t come off as confrontational, just trying to clarify some things.

Anonymous
7/6/23, 6:14 AM
@[Lucas](/user/show/10003070) After reviewing the skip, it seems like a more "realistic" ending would be for the organization to decide to cut their losses and seal the town off from the rest of the world. Although, my inner pervert can't help but imagine how much hotter it'd be if he somehow did manage to turn the tables on them and ended up using their resources to spread his influence beyond just the town...and hey, maybe pushing the story in that slightly more fanciful, supervillain-esque direction would make it feel less awkward to write about? Just spitballing :innocent:

Zander
7/6/23, 1:34 PM
@[Lucas](/user/show/10003070) Everything is fine, thanks for the adequate response to my comment). In general, there are a lot of hot guys in the SCP world and other characters (for example, Cain and Abel) it would be cool if someone wrote a story about how Cain and then Abel were made secret sex slaves (using hypnosis). Although it will be difficult for Cain to do this due to his ability to reflect absolutely everything that threatens him, etc. But still, it would be fun to read a story about it (how someone slowly but correctly corrupts them and turns them into their sex slaves).
Zander
7/6/23, 1:24 PM
I agree that most likely the city will be isolated from the rest of the world and the memory of the people of the whole world will be erased. No one will be able to enter and exit the city, turning the city into a Zone. I think this would be the perfect ending to this story, because no matter how powerful our main character is, he still cannot resist the Foundation (because the Foundation has artifacts much more powerful than the protagonist's artifacts) and besides, the foundation is not the only powerful organization in the SCP world