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7/6/23, 6:00 AM
As soon as i saw the author's name i knew it was going to be a good read and yet again you have not disappointed in any way, its been good to have the conversion documented I do wonder why the difference in drones, are we going to be an uprising of the Drones hence the (S) drones

7/6/23, 10:01 AM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Thanks for the compliment, MalSkin. Reading your comment, I agree that there has to be some kind of problem. But I'm not thinking that it would come from a drone. But a good story needs to have conflict. And to be honest, there wasn't that much conflict in this particular story. The subject did resist the conversion. But other than his futile attempts, everything went according to the Recruiter's plan. Nobody is really asking about the Recruiter. Is he a drone: maybe an R-Drone? He doesn't seem to be because he talks of a hopeful conversion and he has to jack off to obtain his own pleasure. So he must be a human acolyte. In my mind, the drones are perfect, and the humans are flawed. So if there was to be a conflict or opposition to the drone conversion, it would come from humans. And having a human recruiter could be the weak link in their organization. If I were to write another chapter, I would definitely up the conflict that challenges the drone organization.
Anonymous
7/6/23, 9:33 AM
hot!!!
7/6/23, 4:57 AM
I'm about halfway through writing part 6 of this story, but I'm not sure I should finish it. Looking at the ratings, it falls into the BOTTOM 20% of two categories. I mean, I wasn't expecting top ratings for my first attempt, but if it's THAT bad, I'm kind of embarrassed to continue. Clearly I'm not in the same league as my favorite authors. But I'm glad I got it "out of my system" anyway... it felt good.

Martin
7/6/23, 9:32 AM
@[Millard](/user/show/914224) It's definitely not the bottom 20%, believe me. Actually, your ratings are all above average (you have more than 4.3 in most if not all categories), but the number of ratings is very low. That's not an uncommon issue, over time the number of reatings will increase. However, if the number of readers is declining throughout the series, it's an indication that the theme is not that interesting to most readers. But that doesn't mean that the story is bad. Don't let that discourage you. You're writing stories for your own enjoyment, if many other people get a lot of enjoyment out of them, that's an additional bonus.
7/6/23, 9:06 AM
Great story...vampires, smoking and rubber..mmmmm
BDJBoy
7/6/23, 5:00 AM
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Gay Harem
7/6/23, 5:16 AM
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Gay Harem
7/6/23, 5:15 AM
@[Kurst](/user/show/28861) Thank you for playing Gay Harem and being the party of the community on Martin's site!
Jul 4, 2023
blankbot
7/6/23, 3:10 AM
Very nicely written.
12/18/22, 3:23 PM
You are the BEST and most creative writer. THANK YOU!

ghostwriter
7/6/23, 3:07 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) means a lot!
7/5/23, 1:04 AM
What a success. And what a surprise. I didn't think I would see this series continue. The level of detail must have took a hot minute to get right. It was impressive. Especially with the descriptions on how the two drones showed off their bodies. And with how these drones have turned out; I would love to be one of them.

Rub.berized
7/5/23, 11:04 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) It did to be honest and I was never fully satisfied with the other parts. Because the vision in my head was nice and many of you said so as well. But it's the first time I felt I found a way to not only describe the actions that turn me on but to take you all on a journey to hear, smell, see what's happening. I can play with suspense, arousal and a real story. That's why I will revist the other parts and have done so already for chapter 1 and 12. Step by step, I want to improve the numerous mistakes as well as the overall writing. And while I continue for now with the main story, that scene between Mustafa and the drones have me new ideas. As well as the loose idea of the new gym staff for Mr. Wolff.

7/6/23, 2:54 AM
@[Rub.berized](/user/show/1146099) Then I will definitely want to revisit the previous chapters than. And I was glad in the previous chapters that you chose to go with a perforated hood. It makes them so much more artificial and drone-like. The less of the actual person that is visible the better in my mind. Though moving forward there maybe a complication. The drones are programmed to have a need for rubber. Yet the gym owner may want them to be dressed differently. Perhaps the construction owner too. Do you think they can still be drones outside of rubber given the level of programming they have? Or will this have to be explained to them that it is a requirement for the drones to be as they are?
7/6/23, 1:54 AM
wow! amazingly hot and well written scene. bravo!!!