@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) means a lot!

@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) It did to be honest and I was never fully satisfied with the other parts. Because the vision in my head was nice and many of you said so as well. But it's the first time I felt I found a way to not only describe the actions that turn me on but to take you all on a journey to hear, smell, see what's happening. I can play with suspense, arousal and a real story. That's why I will revist the other parts and have done so already for chapter 1 and 12. Step by step, I want to improve the numerous mistakes as well as the overall writing. And while I continue for now with the main story, that scene between Mustafa and the drones have me new ideas. As well as the loose idea of the new gym staff for Mr. Wolff.

@[Rub.berized](/user/show/1146099) Then I will definitely want to revisit the previous chapters than. And I was glad in the previous chapters that you chose to go with a perforated hood. It makes them so much more artificial and drone-like. The less of the actual person that is visible the better in my mind. Though moving forward there maybe a complication. The drones are programmed to have a need for rubber. Yet the gym owner may want them to be dressed differently. Perhaps the construction owner too. Do you think they can still be drones outside of rubber given the level of programming they have? Or will this have to be explained to them that it is a requirement for the drones to be as they are?

@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Nice! I inspired another reader!!! And just for the record, I was a horny teenager when The Next Generation was airing. And DAMN! When I saw the Borg, I so desperately wanted Locutus to assimilate the entire Enterprise. Seeing men in form-fitting rubber, their personality bleached out like their skin, and existing in a unified Collective. The Borg and an amalgam other ideas created the pervy mind that I am. So if you can write your own kinky scene, I'm all ready and willing to read it.

@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) For me I guess the comparable images are 1.) the "Spell of the Siren" episode of GI Joe; all the male Joes falling under the spell and marching off under the Baroness's command, but I didn't want the Joes to be just mindless slaves of the siren's conch; 2.) the "Ming's Household Helpers" and "Like Father, Like Daughter" episodes of Defenders of the Earth: the mass enslavement of the families in the first and the prisoners gathered up by the mind controlled police still sticks with me (to the point that I started writing my own version of the Household Helpers story on this site); and 3.) the _Spiral Zone_ cartoon; I'm still trying to work out how being a Zoner under the influence of the Spiral Zone and the control of Overlord might actually work. But thank you for your writing; this along with Implant and Fusion are inspirations for writing.

@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) What other drones are there? That's an excellent question. When I wrote the story, I didn't really give it much thought on exactly what the other drones were. But I know that this was a very large and extremely structured organization. There just couldn't be one type of drone that could universally manage a worldwide powerhouse. So when I got to that part of the story, I just (sorta) just randomly assigned letters to various drones. I-Drone ... X-Drone and so on. I just wanted to leave the door open if I might ... maybe ... ever want to write a follow-up But as a couple days have gone by, if I were to guess here ... and keep in mind that I'm spit-balling ideas. Nothing is written in stone. Here is what I would say: I-Drone: Internet Drone. Imagine a massive complex in which thousands of men in white rubberized suits are physically jacked into the internet. They collectively rule cyberspace with their mind. Their combined and enhanced brain power are capable of monitoring the world's entire population. The small few that have mastery over billions. They monitor everything about your daily life. They know everything about you. Your deepest, darkest thoughts, desires and fantasies. They are like The Fates. They guide you to where they want you to go. They are the unseen pilots that steer humanity. (I would imagine Martin, the man that controls this website to be an I-Drone. Isn't it obvious? Martin uses this website to steer us towards specific kinks and ideas. He has brought together a group of men, and is currently grooming us for any or all I-Drones' purposes. If Martin reads this, I have absolutely no complaint. "I exist to serve") A-Drone: Admin Drone. There are even few men that have been selected to be Admins. While I-Drones are the pilots, the Admin captain. These drones analyze every variable that is happening in the world. They don't necessarily monitor and steer the course of people, but that of world events. But they do more than just monitor. Their decisions are immediate, and actions are swift. They ultimately control all the other drones. While A-Drones are the brain, all other drones are the body. They give orders on who the C-Drones convert, the S-Drones attack, and the X-Drones (REDACTED). Their ultimate goal remains unknown. X-Drones: [INFORMATION REDACTED]

@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) There's def gonna be some size play.

@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you!

@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) That idea definitely has the potential to becoming a story. If my pervy thoughts create a ripple effect to inspire other men to write their pervy stories .... now it sounds like some kind of butterfly effect. I hope your imagination runs wild.