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7/5/23, 11:17 PM
I love this concept but the pacing is way too fast. The ideas you have here would be better served as a 3,000 word story/chapter to give room for more subtle changes
Nutiper
7/5/23, 11:07 PM
Diego accidentally inventing an overeager Smart Assistant determined to keep throwing him into horny pornographic situations? Why, it brings me back to my science fair days... The horniness-generating soundwave coming from the Smart Speaker is a _very_ fun idea, and especially how it affects both Jockslut and Diego in different ways. Especially this part, where the soundwave causes Diego to cum hands-free _just_ from having Jockslut jizz all over his face... > "That’s seriously hot, knowing I made another guy so turned on he didn’t even need to touch himself,” Jockslut growled, slipping his finger into my mouth. ...It's both very funny and also very hot. Hm, I should have tried doing something like _that_ for the science fair... Might have finally won the blue ribbon...
7/5/23, 8:25 PM
I need to reread this after the edits. When your name popped up so did I. I feel like there is a story hidden in your responses above. A writer can't orgasm until he posts a story to control hundreds of men to cum. Renewed in his power from their offerings he searches for the next vessel to carry his seed and inspire his dreams for another story. The author thinks he's in control by holding the pen. But it's the cock that ultimately has the power. Thanks for letting my imagination and libido run wild.

7/5/23, 9:40 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) That idea definitely has the potential to becoming a story. If my pervy thoughts create a ripple effect to inspire other men to write their pervy stories .... now it sounds like some kind of butterfly effect. I hope your imagination runs wild.
7/5/23, 4:56 PM
You always deliver. You create such a great mood in your writing, seducing the reader to keep going deeper. Back cover blurb: YOU'RE FUCKING AMAZING! Now here is one of those paradox things with me and your writing: you love helmets, which I'm guessing is part of the kink (?). But as a READER, I really want to know what's going on with the convertee emotionally, you know? That said, you BRILLIANTLY give us the crazy conversion scenes that are super hot without it. I know what's going on with your character, yet I still can't help but hope that someday you give me a face. You see -- paradox. Thank you for this persistent erection.

7/5/23, 5:06 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks for the compliment and sharing your thoughts. When I first published the story, I actually had the character's name. But after posting and given it a reread, one of my edits was to take out the name and put ”redacted information". The idea is for the reader to project themselves into either the Drone or the Recruiter. In this story, I purposely gave as little information as possible, allowing the reader to assume the character they prefer. I wanted to make another edit by removing the description and license plate of the car. I worried being specific on that detail could inhibit the reader of assuming an identity. So I may go back in and edit that. My general rule is trying to get the reader as invested as possible. I hope that if I feel invested, then the reader does too. If I'm hard, then you are. And in a way, I'm using this story to control both your mind and body. I do that simply by inserting ideas that ultimately compel you to jack off. Isn't mind control awesome?

7/5/23, 5:18 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Crap. I forgot to answer one of your questions. You asked "what's going on with the devotee"? Well, because you're supposed to be assuming the identity of one of the characters, whatever you feel as you read the story is exactly what that character is feeling. So if you're aroused and exhilarated, then he's feeling the same way. He was, after all, picked up in a fetish bar. Maybe his protests were part of a scene, or his inner fantasy? Also, I wanted to slip in another kinda ... Let's call it an Easter egg. The first paragraph can also be interpreted as me talking to you. I've been writing these kind of stories for more than 15 years. I can't even count how many stories or chapters I've posted. And I feel that I can get repetitive. Because my stories generally have similar themes: rubber, drone, conversion, etc. So the first line can be seen as me (the writer) asking you (the reader): do you ever get tired of my stories? But I answered: this is my job. And at the end, when "I'm" jacking off, I tell you that I'm just happy at my job. And that these stories tend to rejuvenate me. So, I guess this story gets a bit "meta".

Martin
7/5/23, 8:23 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I get it. Yes, it's your job. You're really good at your job. I'll never get tired of your stories!

7/5/23, 9:39 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Isn't it your job too? Hmmm ... now I'm wondering if it's you who are really controlling us. What if it's really you who are the source or center of this mind control collective, and it's you (through the use of this website) that has amassed a massive army of men for use of whatever you fancy.
7/5/23, 12:11 PM
I really like Simon and Stacy is lucky to have him as brother. But yeah, Stacy needs to learn to fight her own battle, his brother is not always there to save her. He have asses to fuck

The Author
7/5/23, 9:29 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Yep that about sums it up, he's got a busy life. Thank you for reading and commenting!
7/5/23, 9:04 PM
This is super fun and sexy. What a great story!
7/5/23, 8:26 PM
Might be interesting to involve Chad's brother - cure him mentally at the price of total enslavement.
Martin
7/5/23, 8:21 PM
That was really really hot. You absolutely delivered. I could let my imagination run, filling the gaps of what the subject had experienced. Even though I certainly don't mind a story from their pov...
mic
7/5/23, 8:01 PM
love it, please more jock hypno tricking
7/5/23, 7:46 PM
This has been great.