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5/14/25, 5:05 PM
I am total agreement with Glennyboi: that chapter was really hot!! :hot_face: The drugged cake was an inspired choice. What better way to subdue the twins on their birthday than by putting something in their birthday cake? And Zach's power over Kai was the perfect way to re-capture him, taking advantage of his guilt over leaving Will behind (even though Will was right there to be part of the capture). So how will Octavius Fiend use the powers that he extracted from the twins? And what is that power? As always I am already looking forward to the next chapter. I'm so glad you're back to writing, SleepyAsh! Thanks for sharing your amazing writing with the group!! :smiley:

5/17/25, 6:13 PM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) A sort of drugged desert is something I've wanted to include for some time! It's very good to be back, and once again sorry for the long absence! Next chapter is already pending approval :grin:

5/17/25, 6:57 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Ooooooo can’t wait 🥵

Anonymous
5/18/25, 3:24 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Awesome! Can’t wait to read it! 😃
5/14/25, 5:34 PM
Brother, this was a beautiful, satisfying, and complete ending to an epic journey. Thank you for letting us into your pack and sharing your world with us. I’m so happy Luna brought you into my orbit and that you chose to dance with her when it would have been easier to give up. I can’t wait to see what more she holds in store for you and us! You’re the best ♥️

5/15/25, 4:54 AM
@[Furrybttm40](/user/show/10010813) Thank you for the kind words and encouragement. Very pleased that some folks enjoyed the entire ride.
5/14/25, 5:56 PM
Somehow missed this when it first came out. I hope this gets continued at some point
5/14/25, 5:58 PM
I really hope you keep going. Maybe turn the entire school gay. Just amazing story.
5/14/25, 6:02 PM
The failure chapters are absolutely the best and this one is no exception. Incredibly hot. I wish I were Jeff.

5/15/25, 6:20 AM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) Good to see you back here, ControlMe. The failure ending you wrote was one of my personal favorites on this series :)
5/14/25, 6:47 PM
I'm only sad we skipped a few years because there wasn't more story haha. Great stuff!!

5/15/25, 4:42 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Haha, thanks!!
5/14/25, 7:04 PM
Another sexy superhero falls. I agree that this slow downward spiral into sexual addiction was quite hot. The way the vain heroes are worn down is great build up, and then they way are forced to display themselves, their shameful addictions, and their orgasmic denigration is such a good way to demonstrate how far they have fallen from their self-righteous ways. Your method for taking their boastful masculine pride in their bodies and steadily twisting that into embarrassing sexual exhibitionism works very well with these kinds of characters and themes.

5/16/25, 3:05 AM
@[johnclark](/user/show/1014143) Thank you so much <3 Love to see hero falling so hard too !!!!
5/1/25, 2:21 PM
Am I dreaming? I discovered this series a while ago and really enjoyed it, and was disheartened to learn that it was on hiatus... I thought I should put it in a drawer and forget about it, but then you came back and voilà! I'm looking forward to seeing Dan completely twist the Bob and Michael dynamic and create a new form of father and son, a new form of family. It's exciting to see an alpha become a beta, but I'm also looking forward to seeing what kind of "alpha" he becomes.

5/14/25, 8:19 PM
@[EROEGOENDO](/user/show/10046775) I think what keep the story on my mind all these years was that I never had the chance to write what I wanted with the family. I think these 10 chapters I put the foundation for many fun stuff but I just tease it. Now it's time to have fun, keep twisting the family :) I think you'll like chapter 12
5/14/25, 9:39 PM
Very nice although as soon as you jump from first person to third person between chapters.

5/14/25, 9:58 PM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) That's a mistake, I changed some words to stay in 3rd person. Thanks
5/14/25, 9:55 PM
Great writing dude. Love the slow burn that I hope ultimately ends with Liam finding himself as a cock hungry needy bottom who is completely happy with his newly discovered desires. Love the armpit play.

lukas pucci
5/14/25, 11:12 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) thank u so much, man! if u love armpits ill love further chapters, fucking love them too.