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7/4/23, 7:26 PM
Oh wow, hot. Very interesting chapter. Cool stuff here. I love the fact that the procedure turned them subby and such, well the two dudes, it making the one dude a dominant top is hot. I wonder what will happen after the baby(ies) are born, like will they be allowed to leave camp and get a home or will they have to stay in the complex. But yeah, super sexy stuff. Oh. So i wonder if the second generation of this project will grant say scientists some of the alpha drug so they can have their good boys. hehe
7/4/23, 6:03 PM
This was remarkable -- a sort of dreamy, confused sensation when reading that well mirrored Jerome/Jai's own situation. And I won't lie, the blasphemy was pretty hot.
Jul 4, 2023
7/4/23, 5:33 PM
More detail of the changes happening, physically and mentally . LOVE this story; so full of potential. Once they meet, give details about their before and whats going to be after as it's happening. Very hot!
Leo
7/4/23, 4:37 PM
I freaking love where this story is going! There’s nothing hotter than a young guy controlling a sexy dad and making him his obedient daddy slave. Especially if there are multiple dads to play with. Since Dexter is about to have all these hot daddies under his control, he should give them each their own position, they could be his personal driver, chef, gardener, puppy, and butler (this would allow Brad to focus on being his full time brainwashed security guard). Maybe Dexter could even convince the daddies to give him all their personal belongings (houses, cars, bank accounts), to prove how much they love their master. I seriously can’t wait for the next chapter! Thank you so much for your work!
Jul 4, 2023
7/4/23, 4:13 PM
Hope there will be more
7/4/23, 3:28 PM
I didn't find this erotic, per se -- drag is great but not my kink -- but your writing talent is amazing. I was _there_ while reading this. And I loved the sinister humor.
7/4/23, 3:15 PM
Whoa! kinda blown away by the various unexpected events in this chapter! 1. didn't expect Lex to turn the tables on Theo 2. surprised to see Lex actually sacrifice a percentage of his company to Mannheim and 3. maybe most surprising of all....Lex displaying concern or care for Superman! Interested to see where the story goes from here!
7/4/23, 3:13 PM
So there is a way to reverse the magic, and im guessing its true love. But things are messier now with the addition of Warner. I wonder how he will complicated things? Cant wait to read the next chapter.
7/4/23, 3:11 PM
Deeply sinister and erotic at the same time -- makes me think of La Femme Nikita a bit, in that finishing school.
7/4/23, 2:08 PM
Never trust someone who calls you a poor unfortunate soul.

7/4/23, 2:23 PM
@Reader That is correct!