Recent Comments

7/4/23, 11:56 PM
interesting concept. Its more... pacing like how events told in what order needs some refinement. what is written interests and hope continued and watch you develop
7/4/23, 11:23 PM
Fuc'n A, needs more, continue.
7/4/23, 5:44 PM
Hot! Hot! Hot! Such a sexy story. Loves the callbacks. Also yay on rimming. Also hehe on the end.

The Author
7/4/23, 10:46 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Cheers, I'm glad you've enjoyed it. And thanks for taking the time to comment, it's a great help to stay motivated.
7/4/23, 7:48 PM
Very hot, fun, and sexy!

The Author
7/4/23, 10:41 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you! Glad you liked it!
7/4/23, 10:03 PM
Incredibly hot 🥵 and unique too

7/4/23, 10:38 PM
@[Halvor](/user/show/42670) Thanks! Thinking up new ideas is tough, but I’m glad it stood out.
Hyphyno
7/4/23, 9:28 PM
I'm truly enchanted by the world building in this story, all the rules and attention to detail about Witchcraft seems so plausible that it makes me wonder if you're a real Witch lol. Would love to keep following the process of Daddy Clark being turned into a thrall.
7/4/23, 7:53 PM
I love this story! The only change I would have loved to see was the flip side and have Sadist Sammy, Owned Owen, Dominated Dominic, and Masochist Max. I would love to see the twisted perversion from Edlam’s mind of that relationship.
7/4/23, 7:26 PM
Oh wow, hot. Very interesting chapter. Cool stuff here. I love the fact that the procedure turned them subby and such, well the two dudes, it making the one dude a dominant top is hot. I wonder what will happen after the baby(ies) are born, like will they be allowed to leave camp and get a home or will they have to stay in the complex. But yeah, super sexy stuff. Oh. So i wonder if the second generation of this project will grant say scientists some of the alpha drug so they can have their good boys. hehe
7/4/23, 6:03 PM
This was remarkable -- a sort of dreamy, confused sensation when reading that well mirrored Jerome/Jai's own situation. And I won't lie, the blasphemy was pretty hot.
Jul 4, 2023
7/4/23, 5:33 PM
More detail of the changes happening, physically and mentally . LOVE this story; so full of potential. Once they meet, give details about their before and whats going to be after as it's happening. Very hot!