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5/14/25, 10:07 PM
Incredibly hot, can’t wait for the next chapter. The slow burn is perfect torture.
5/14/25, 10:12 PM
Damn! Very hot. I can't wait to see his final form in action.
5/14/25, 10:19 PM
Very hot. I've been waiting for Bob to be programmed into a submissive bottom slut. When do we find out what Michael's new programming entails?

5/14/25, 10:44 PM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) It was ~~Bob~~ Bobby's destiny to be a submissive slut 😌. I'm glad you're happy with it. There's gonna be more about Michael in the next chapter. What would you like to happen to him?
Anonymous
5/14/25, 11:04 PM
If a little sweat drip has such a strong effect on Liam, can't imagine what Noah cumming on him would turn him into.

lukas pucci
5/14/25, 11:13 PM
@Anonymous poor liam, he’s no idea what he’s in for! btw chapter four is up tomorrow! haha
5/14/25, 11:24 PM
Ugh yes, I love this series. You write porn with such a great cadence for jerking off to.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/14/25, 11:40 PM
I like the shift a lot. Damned hot. Dan as the protective, loving, but ever-horny Dad. And Bobby as his slutty, whoreish, "girl." I can see Bobby like Ani in the movie Anora. Damned hot!

5/15/25, 4:05 AM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com Thank you for the comment. My main goal was to make it hot! And great analogy about Bobby/Ani
5/14/25, 11:55 PM
I found the previous chapter to be unexpected. Like it was totally not the path I expected he would be brought. And on pov, uh, yes I miss having our controller's mindset. I enjoy that part the most.

5/15/25, 4:01 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Hey! I've missed your comments so much. Sorry if I was too harsh with Michael, but some people can be molded and others needs to be broken. About Dan, I miss him too. I think it's the easier character to write but I needed to go through the Summers family first.

5/15/25, 4:15 AM
@[ulver91](/user/show/926681) I mean Michael was being molded in the chapter at the gym that we first saw him. Hell his best friend was impacting his mind by giving him what sounded to Michael as orders. That is why I thought a more gentle approach was going to work, we already saw him bending, so it wasn't like he was fighting it or resisting. Which is why breaking him felt off. One of the things I really liked about this series was us seeing in the dom / controller's head every chapter, so an entire chapter of just the mindfucked dad was well less enjoyable to me compared to the top pov / shared povs. (Also I can't really say I enjoy the more female emphasis that seems to be coming up in terminology.) But yeah these are my thoughts and basically the why of my lack of comments. It is cool seeing the story come back though. Even if its going down a different and more harsher path then I expected.

5/15/25, 6:06 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I get what you're saying. Here's my reasoning for some stuff. 1. I began this story to write something I would love to read. Slow burn stories with many chapters are my favorites so that was one of the main goals here and I think you can see it in the first 10 chapters. Sadly I stopped writing it for many years and I was sad I didn't get to some goal posts for the story. This time I wanted to fasten the pace, not to rush it but to get to what I wanted for the characters. My original plan for Michael's arc was more subtle but that would slow Bob's arch and the introduction of the youngest brother. I get why you feel it's off but it's a decision I take to keep writing. 2. I think not having a lighter voice in the last chapter made it seem more harsh than I intended. I want to make it clear that Dan it's not an asshole (I think it's one of the main premises) and he doesn’t want to make them suffer. We will get to Dan, I'm excited about it. 3. I want the story to explore different kinks and experiences with different characters. To me it was pointless to have three family members having the same dynamic with Dan so I wanted Michael's arc to be different to Bob's. Michael is an absolute asshole, so his path it's rough but not dark.
5/15/25, 12:39 AM
And as I talked about before...those guys got wrecked this time! Whew!

5/15/25, 2:49 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) I was _nice_ to Lee and Joe,... I've got to get that out of my system somehow, right? ;)
5/15/25, 2:02 AM
I loved this so much. So good.

5/15/25, 4:43 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Thanks!
Anonymous
5/15/25, 3:08 AM
i too read this in chastity, I've been locked for 17 days now. How I'd like to be locked with a PA cage for 40 days and 40 nights, to start.