Recent Comments

7/24/23, 1:49 AM
This really hits my buttons and the writing is very good. I'd just say don't try to ram the descriptions in so hard at the start. It's jarring and the reader knows you're trying to get the descriptive stuff in too much, but you can tell later on you're way better at slipping the details in then. I think it's a lot more natural for you to take your time on the descriptive bits than try to push too much in right up front, and you've got the writing talent to do that for sure!

Author (name hidden)
8/5/23, 4:50 PM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Yeah, sorry. Was my first time writing a TF story, and I was a bit rushing to not hit deadline, could not make the description smoother. But I felt it was needed to get a bit of an idea of what everyone looked like early on. Thanks!
8/4/23, 3:22 PM
Just when I was thinking about the pharaoh's story! Fun worldbuilding. OwO

8/5/23, 3:58 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) There are many, many stories that have been unknown to humanity so far.
peter
8/5/23, 3:30 PM
need another chapter please.
8/5/23, 1:12 PM
THAT was the best story I have read in such a long long time. The recollections from Jack and Tristan are brilliant. PLEASE write a follow up. Your writing style is just PERFECTION
8/5/23, 11:38 AM
The only part that disappointed me a bit was when Mr. Graham seemed to show the son a lot of respect and adoration for his beauty. I assumed you would take it in the direction of having Aston become his boyfriend/someone with a higher position than just another subordinate.
Suitlover
8/5/23, 8:41 AM
Love this series. Great job. Reading this makes me so hard. The next one should be the Captain of the police station turned into a daddy pig. Asking Stellato and Bradley about their strange behavior….. He should be forced on Tanner‘s cock till he accept how good it feels to suck on a cock while his former straight ass get fucked and his own cock locked into a tiny cage….!
Anonymous
8/5/23, 7:43 AM
super hot!! can't wait fo the next chapter
Jul 21, 2023
8/5/23, 5:42 AM
Fucking HOT!!
8/5/23, 4:19 AM
More more please more! Hopefully the next chapter come out sooner!
7/19/23, 10:34 AM
I love this world so much. The character mean a lot to me and their interactions feel so real and natural. The relationships are important so knowing that Jasper has to keep a secret and deceive Rhys is painful. Nova. Oh dear. If you're going to accept being converted into a pet, that mind-blowing sex training is probably a good trade for paying that price. That was a great scene. My favourites of this chapter are the attitude and personality planning with Nova and his rehabilitation person/trainer. As always, I can't wait for more.

8/5/23, 2:41 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Cuddle-switch says: "Evan! Our more most consistent and frequent commenter -- and always such great and in-depth comments! We're loving the interactions as well. That's definitely my favourite part. The mind-melting sex kinda had me giggling as I wrote it. That was fun." You know how much it means to me to hear your thoughts and have your encouragement! <3 Thank you for being one of our most constant readers and supporters. <3 <3 <3