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7/4/23, 3:05 AM
I loved the setting and the retributive transformation so much here, though some few things confused me (like, I thought he didn't get along with Chad? But once the transformation happened it sounded like he did?) Not that it matters in the slightest. I seriously love that instead of the small cock tf thing so many do when a himbo or slut transformation takes place, I love that you went the opposite direction. I think it makes these tfs seem even more wanton. Just... really liked all of this.
spiralthiago
7/4/23, 2:01 AM
More please more
Dec 17, 2018
7/4/23, 1:02 AM
I really loved this framework -- the DND-becomes-reality thing is perfect for this sort of story and you told it exceptionally well!
Diendota
7/3/23, 11:03 PM
Still thinking about this story since the first time I saw it, awesome work! Can't wait to see Micah does in the next chapter!
7/3/23, 10:33 PM
This series has a lot of potential. There is a whole lore and invention that is hardly seen in the stories on this site. Not only does it have all the elements I like, the execution of them is incredible. But even better is Clark Matthison's profile. I swear I came together with the protagonist in all the moments that described him more... depth.
7/3/23, 10:25 PM
Great chapter. I really enjoyed everything that was done with Rich (it's so up to my expectations that I suspect you've actually read my huge texts) but the highlight is the territorial expansion for the many middle-aged men Dexter targets. Should we change the series to "Master of the Daddies"? PS: And what is Dexter's father (who doesn't even have a name) harassing Brad? Superb. I just felt a certain lack of emphasis on Rich, but the character fulfilled his arc well.
mic
7/3/23, 9:28 PM
great, please more, love it
7/3/23, 9:02 PM
Nice opening! :smile: If you can't manage to write evrything in time (I know I'm not sure about doing my one-shot story for the contest in time :sweat_smile:), I would be still interested in reading the rest at a later date! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

7/3/23, 9:16 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) We'll see, Christmas is a busy time for me :santa: :satisfied:
blankbot
6/30/22, 2:16 AM
Nicely written. More, please!

7/1/22, 9:56 PM
@blankbot I am hoping to have Part II finished soon. Thanks for commenting!

7/3/23, 9:12 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Please please please finish this. Absolutely one of my favorite scenes
mic
7/3/23, 8:56 PM
fucking hot, love it, great, please more, how the piss fetish goes on?