Recent Comments

Zander
7/1/23, 5:19 PM
It would be nice to see how Mike turns the Father and the Brothers, Alex into his slaves (how he broke them).

7/1/23, 5:38 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) That you be the plan for the upcoming chapters sir ^^
7/1/23, 3:59 PM
Very hot!!!!! :heart_eyes: The drones are on a recruitement drive! YEAH!!!! :robot:
7/1/23, 3:34 PM
HOT Chapter, Supaboi! Def like the new direction of the last 2 chapters.... Can't wait to see what happens next!
6/30/23, 9:50 PM
It took me a very long time to catch up to the more recent stuff, and it was very nice to see the evolution of your style. The story also went in many funny directions. 😍 I do have a problem with your overuse of capital letters, but this seems to have calmed down in recent chapters.

7/1/23, 3:24 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks, Bobby!! Appreciate ALL of your comments!! My overall style continues to be "a work in progress", but hearing comments from you are certainly helpful "to hone in on my shortcomings"... I had been utilizing the capital letters mainly to demonstrate "moments of anger/domination/strength".... but I will keep your comment in mind for future chapters/stories!! Super GR8FUL that you're diggin the storyline & hope you enjoy the next chapter (which is currently in review)!! Happy 4th!:firecracker:
7/1/23, 2:46 PM
Part 2? Please 🙏
Anonymous
7/1/23, 2:22 PM
I keep on rereading, this is so lovely
7/1/23, 2:08 PM
This story needs a continuation. Itsvery detailed and so hot. The backstory and world building are great.
Jun 12, 2022
7/1/23, 1:52 PM
That was incredibly erotic and extremely a fun read!
7/1/23, 1:09 PM
I really have to agree -- the sex scenes are sweet and so sex-positive, and I really love that. They're also intensely erotic, which I think is an accomplishment. I liked the tie-in to the larger Priapist/Consummation universe world you create elsewhere!
7/1/23, 11:43 AM
Awesome story!!!! :heart_eyes: