Recent Comments

7/1/23, 5:08 AM
So hot! "You will want to join us" is my best trigger!
7/1/23, 3:26 AM
awesome fan fic. loved it1 so hawt
mic
7/1/23, 2:47 AM
Super hot , one of the best story’s ever , please more , love the tricking , take more , let them naked stripped back , so great , can’t wait for more
James
7/1/23, 2:34 AM
I had a feeling when Brett's Father/Uncle came for visitors day and only visited with Jonas, I knew something was up. Now with Simon dead, I know Jonas and his father are behind all this, Jonas wants revenge on Brett badly, I'm not sure why his father has against Brett other than being Angel/Jakes and Brett's Uncle. I wouldn't be surprised if Jonas father wasn't behind Jake and Brett not being Bulls. Poor Liam what his going to become of him? I only hope Jake can get Thomas to speak the truth about what he knows of Simon and Jonas. I was hoping it would come out before he got cut. I'm so hoping that, that story Liam told Brett early on about the Prince and cockring is true. On to hoping everything turns out well for Brett and Liam before Jonas Breeds Brett.
May 12, 2018
7/1/23, 2:22 AM
Oh how I love reading and re-reading this story. Brings me to a quivering mess, without fluids. But anyway. So sexy hot. Wish there was more to this story. So tantalizing and like oh so sexy hot
7/1/23, 2:02 AM
Nice story. Personaly i would add more detalis for both conversions/assimilations. But the flow is pretty good.
6/22/23, 5:57 PM
I really love mischievous, trickster types, and a short muscular guy is a real turn-on for me, so I love Talley, and I love that he's a dominant vers! He really does say "fuck you" even to such a universe as Consummation, defying his role to do what he loves, while still loving his role as well. Honestly, that's a pretty complex character compared to our usual erotic characters! I do think it's somewhat interesting that for as much as the name of the series is about the Prince, when he features, he's almost always being drug one way or another by his dick! Find some agency, Ariel/Arik!

7/1/23, 1:03 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Yeah, I love writing Talley, he goes so wild with whatever he does and it's hard not to let him take control when he exudes dominance the way he does. Role-wise, it's definitely been tough for Talley to balance both the role thrust on him by his powers and his own dominant preferences. More on that in Top Maker, but it'll show up in different ways here in P&FB as well. I appreciate your insight into Arik—what's happening to him will develop in complexity over the next few chapters, and I'm looking forward to drawing out his dilemma.
mic
7/1/23, 12:58 AM
Great story , please more frag tf story’s
6/22/23, 1:40 PM
Even when it's not My Thing, this story is just so fantastic. I feel silly for commenting on every chapter, but you deserve the kudos for being one of the best writers on the site. And "a romp" is the perfect description for this.

7/1/23, 12:47 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'm so glad! I hope the homoeroticism did the job even when the rimming didn't, heh. I'm a big fan of keeping things hot the whole time in a subtle way. And I appreciate your comments; they tell me that people are picking up what I'm putting down. I really appreciate the compliment. Yeah, I always thought of it as a "romp"—something that could freely go to so many places and just have fun. I do still need to adhere to character development and story, so much of the "romp" will end up appearing in interludes that are less important to the story, which will come up... sooner or later.
mic
7/1/23, 12:18 AM
Fucking Hot , great ideas , dumb more boys dien and steal their dick