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6/30/23, 9:35 PM
I have to ask... should I have read your previous stories? Because.. I feel like I dont quite get everything :D

7/1/23, 12:10 AM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) Possibly? This is connected to my truth or dare series, https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/788616 And https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/901968 After tue game explains a little more what the world is. Also this story is an alternate point of view to https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10006887
mic
6/30/23, 11:44 PM
Wow love it , please more , more CTf , trick more guys and film it , so hot ideas and Writen , can’t wait
mic
6/30/23, 10:15 PM
Wow Great Story , love it , please add more guys, trick and bet them, take their belongings , please more , absolut Favorit
6/30/23, 10:06 PM
I hope you continue the story with Daniel and Francis spreading the goo to the agency and other people needs to be affected.
6/30/23, 9:06 PM
That was fast but i aint complaining that Daniel is transformed. Edit: And i was wondering when was he changed, and i reread the first chapter and there i saw that it was when they first interacted at the room.
6/30/23, 8:54 PM
Cool premise and start of the story. Cant wait to read more
6/30/23, 5:45 PM
Wait, have his head and hands reverted to looking human again so he could theoretically put clothes on and fool his former partner, or is it that he has metal hair growing out of his metal head? Both are hot ideas, and either way I can’t wait to read more!

6/30/23, 8:07 PM
@[Nodara](/user/show/970256) Sorry if it wasn't quite clear enough in this particular chapter! Luckily it should be clear in the third (and for now, final) chapter :)
6/30/23, 7:45 PM
Frankly I would have loved to see hem live together & follow their adventures in life.
6/30/23, 7:11 PM
My only complaint is seeing the next chapter as the last
Island Jock
6/30/23, 7:09 PM
Really liking this story. Wonder what other powers or attributes Nate will have.