Recent Comments

6/30/23, 10:06 PM
I hope you continue the story with Daniel and Francis spreading the goo to the agency and other people needs to be affected.
6/30/23, 9:06 PM
That was fast but i aint complaining that Daniel is transformed. Edit: And i was wondering when was he changed, and i reread the first chapter and there i saw that it was when they first interacted at the room.
6/30/23, 8:54 PM
Cool premise and start of the story. Cant wait to read more
6/30/23, 5:45 PM
Wait, have his head and hands reverted to looking human again so he could theoretically put clothes on and fool his former partner, or is it that he has metal hair growing out of his metal head? Both are hot ideas, and either way I can’t wait to read more!

6/30/23, 8:07 PM
@[Nodara](/user/show/970256) Sorry if it wasn't quite clear enough in this particular chapter! Luckily it should be clear in the third (and for now, final) chapter :)
6/30/23, 7:45 PM
Frankly I would have loved to see hem live together & follow their adventures in life.
6/30/23, 7:11 PM
My only complaint is seeing the next chapter as the last
Island Jock
6/30/23, 7:09 PM
Really liking this story. Wonder what other powers or attributes Nate will have.
6/30/23, 6:34 PM
Iwant JC & Mark to reunite.
6/30/23, 6:05 PM
Continue to enjoy
6/30/23, 5:49 PM
This is a very hot story, consider me a fan! I agree that I think this is Edlam and he always delivers on providing steamy incest stories. I hope you do well on the challenge!