Recent Comments

mic
7/1/23, 12:58 AM
Great story , please more frag tf story’s
6/22/23, 1:40 PM
Even when it's not My Thing, this story is just so fantastic. I feel silly for commenting on every chapter, but you deserve the kudos for being one of the best writers on the site. And "a romp" is the perfect description for this.

7/1/23, 12:47 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'm so glad! I hope the homoeroticism did the job even when the rimming didn't, heh. I'm a big fan of keeping things hot the whole time in a subtle way. And I appreciate your comments; they tell me that people are picking up what I'm putting down. I really appreciate the compliment. Yeah, I always thought of it as a "romp"—something that could freely go to so many places and just have fun. I do still need to adhere to character development and story, so much of the "romp" will end up appearing in interludes that are less important to the story, which will come up... sooner or later.
mic
7/1/23, 12:18 AM
Fucking Hot , great ideas , dumb more boys dien and steal their dick
6/30/23, 9:35 PM
I have to ask... should I have read your previous stories? Because.. I feel like I dont quite get everything :D

7/1/23, 12:10 AM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) Possibly? This is connected to my truth or dare series, https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/788616 And https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/901968 After tue game explains a little more what the world is. Also this story is an alternate point of view to https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10006887
mic
6/30/23, 11:44 PM
Wow love it , please more , more CTf , trick more guys and film it , so hot ideas and Writen , can’t wait
mic
6/30/23, 10:15 PM
Wow Great Story , love it , please add more guys, trick and bet them, take their belongings , please more , absolut Favorit
6/30/23, 10:06 PM
I hope you continue the story with Daniel and Francis spreading the goo to the agency and other people needs to be affected.
6/30/23, 9:06 PM
That was fast but i aint complaining that Daniel is transformed. Edit: And i was wondering when was he changed, and i reread the first chapter and there i saw that it was when they first interacted at the room.
6/30/23, 8:54 PM
Cool premise and start of the story. Cant wait to read more
6/30/23, 5:45 PM
Wait, have his head and hands reverted to looking human again so he could theoretically put clothes on and fool his former partner, or is it that he has metal hair growing out of his metal head? Both are hot ideas, and either way I can’t wait to read more!

6/30/23, 8:07 PM
@[Nodara](/user/show/970256) Sorry if it wasn't quite clear enough in this particular chapter! Luckily it should be clear in the third (and for now, final) chapter :)