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6/30/23, 9:30 AM
Brilliant, I can't wait to see what the trainers do to poor Lee, LUCKY F**KER!
6/30/23, 9:06 AM
Hey there ! Shame I arrive too late... got me wanting to get back in the game though, hope there will be some more ! If ever, i'm ID 37675... Thanks and best wishes !

Gay Harem
6/30/23, 9:13 AM
@[Laszlo-K](/user/show/10013582) Hey, hey! I just assigned you some rewards!
6/30/23, 4:55 AM
love elmara too, waiting for more

6/30/23, 9:08 AM
@[draloz](/user/show/1395238) Thanks darloz! Just working on it 😜
6/30/23, 6:54 AM
Great start and really well written but it's left me thirsty for more so hope the next part comes soon!

6/30/23, 8:06 AM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Ahaha... I'm glad you enjoyed! The whole story was written already, I'm just waiting for the third chapter to be approved ;)
6/30/23, 5:54 AM
Was literally thinking about this series today; pleasant surprise to see a new chapter. Love this story and your writing style and detail is fantastic!
6/30/23, 4:37 AM
Absolutely sensational read.
6/30/23, 2:52 AM
I'm so hard
Mar 7, 2022
6/30/23, 1:58 AM
Gr8 mate, continue On with More,More, MORE !
6/23/23, 7:47 PM
omg so hot, though im a little confused on the differences between Alpha and Beta black and white drones?? otherwise this is HOT

6/24/23, 6:41 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I guess I envisioned a difference between Alpha and Beta drones. Like the term "alpha" implies, these men are more dominant, assertive and aggressive. In the original story, Dave is more dominant. He lures his boss to the Cum Center. And through his actions, he also ensnares Jake. Jake, on the other hand, is the more passive of the pair. He sits by and allows everything to be done to Dave. And even though he has reservations and suspicions, he really does nothing. He allows situations to continue. I guess I envision dominance and submissiveness being brought into balance. And at the end of Brain Feed, the product of both an Alpha and Beta's dna is harvested into creating the perfect clone. But on the flip-side, I'm sure when a situation calls for it, the Cum Center can also breed a clone from two alphas. Could that have been the clone that was standing guard when Jake followed Dave back to the Cum Center? And then beta-beta clones to create a docile horde of servant drones? I guess though we'll never really know the full machinations of the Cum Centers. But one can imagine.

6/30/23, 1:32 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) i think then it's cute that Dave and Jake compliment each other, different types of ultimately the same unified drone system :3
6/30/23, 12:30 AM
This was definitely a great erotic story!