Recent Comments

6/29/23, 11:07 PM
This was hot!
6/29/23, 9:13 PM
Very hot! Great pov. Nice effects. Loved the top fucking the boy. Too bad he didn't rim him first but the fucking was hot!

6/29/23, 10:29 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks, Heru - glad you liked it. I thought long - and hard - about to rim or not to rim. Ultimately decided to leave it out in case I decided to continue the series. Was originally a one-off I thought up after a Twitter prompt by Charlie Walker on the spiderman theme. And I tweeted the whole story out, too - something I'll never do again. Boy was that a nightmare of cut and paste, lol
6/29/23, 10:13 PM
Hope you continue, I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Martin
6/29/23, 8:52 PM
Very interesting concept! Looking forward to the next chapters!
6/29/23, 8:06 PM
Oh i like this story and i find the pov of the bad guy getting his justice the best. Love it when the bad guy gets controlled/humiliated

The Author
6/29/23, 8:13 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Cheers for the support, and glad you like it! I've rather enjoyed writing this one from the perspective of a helplessly humiliated bad guy, to be honest.
6/29/23, 6:05 AM
Is amazing story and very hot. I hope to see you more from you when you contest is over

The Author
6/29/23, 8:04 PM
Thank you @[Evelded](/user/show/1215920)! And hopefully you will, I've been enjoying writing this one, and have some new ideas for some other stories (and some time to get them written, now).
6/29/23, 7:13 PM
Ngl, I cannot wait to read the next part
6/29/23, 4:23 PM
I loved the relatively slow transformation of this one. There were a couple places where the perspective changed from third person to second person, weirdly, but otherwise, it was very well written!
6/29/23, 4:22 PM
It is a masterpiece. Thanks. I hope to read much more from you.