Recent Comments

6/23/23, 7:47 PM
omg so hot, though im a little confused on the differences between Alpha and Beta black and white drones?? otherwise this is HOT

6/24/23, 6:41 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I guess I envisioned a difference between Alpha and Beta drones. Like the term "alpha" implies, these men are more dominant, assertive and aggressive. In the original story, Dave is more dominant. He lures his boss to the Cum Center. And through his actions, he also ensnares Jake. Jake, on the other hand, is the more passive of the pair. He sits by and allows everything to be done to Dave. And even though he has reservations and suspicions, he really does nothing. He allows situations to continue. I guess I envision dominance and submissiveness being brought into balance. And at the end of Brain Feed, the product of both an Alpha and Beta's dna is harvested into creating the perfect clone. But on the flip-side, I'm sure when a situation calls for it, the Cum Center can also breed a clone from two alphas. Could that have been the clone that was standing guard when Jake followed Dave back to the Cum Center? And then beta-beta clones to create a docile horde of servant drones? I guess though we'll never really know the full machinations of the Cum Centers. But one can imagine.

6/30/23, 1:32 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) i think then it's cute that Dave and Jake compliment each other, different types of ultimately the same unified drone system :3
6/30/23, 12:30 AM
This was definitely a great erotic story!
6/29/23, 10:22 PM
Wow, i didnt expect the previous chapter to be topped but look at that; a hotter chapter and twice the victim. Again, i love that its in the pov of the bad guy(s) getting what they deserved. Its funny to think of what kind of guys Stacys life bring in to here. Luckily she has very porductive ~~and perverted~~ brother to help her. Hope theres more to come and maybe in the end have all of Simons Harem do an orgy.

The Author
6/30/23, 12:20 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Good to hear you liked this one too! And yes, poor Stacy seems to be having a hard time of it lately, but thankfully her brother is there to make sure that it's the men causing the problems have an even harder time. But yes, there is more in the works. I now have a plan for Simon to have a plan for his jockboys and their arses.
6/28/23, 4:38 AM
Thank-you, that was a delightful series. I'm so envious of Matt/hew!

6/29/23, 11:44 PM
@[Moo68au](/user/show/919772) Me too! Thanks for reading and for letting me know you enjoyed the series.
6/29/23, 11:07 PM
This was hot!
6/29/23, 9:13 PM
Very hot! Great pov. Nice effects. Loved the top fucking the boy. Too bad he didn't rim him first but the fucking was hot!

6/29/23, 10:29 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks, Heru - glad you liked it. I thought long - and hard - about to rim or not to rim. Ultimately decided to leave it out in case I decided to continue the series. Was originally a one-off I thought up after a Twitter prompt by Charlie Walker on the spiderman theme. And I tweeted the whole story out, too - something I'll never do again. Boy was that a nightmare of cut and paste, lol
6/29/23, 10:13 PM
Hope you continue, I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Martin
6/29/23, 8:52 PM
Very interesting concept! Looking forward to the next chapters!
6/29/23, 8:06 PM
Oh i like this story and i find the pov of the bad guy getting his justice the best. Love it when the bad guy gets controlled/humiliated

The Author
6/29/23, 8:13 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Cheers for the support, and glad you like it! I've rather enjoyed writing this one from the perspective of a helplessly humiliated bad guy, to be honest.
6/29/23, 6:05 AM
Is amazing story and very hot. I hope to see you more from you when you contest is over

The Author
6/29/23, 8:04 PM
Thank you @[Evelded](/user/show/1215920)! And hopefully you will, I've been enjoying writing this one, and have some new ideas for some other stories (and some time to get them written, now).