Recent Comments

6/29/23, 10:13 PM
Hope you continue, I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Martin
6/29/23, 8:52 PM
Very interesting concept! Looking forward to the next chapters!
6/29/23, 8:06 PM
Oh i like this story and i find the pov of the bad guy getting his justice the best. Love it when the bad guy gets controlled/humiliated

The Author
6/29/23, 8:13 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Cheers for the support, and glad you like it! I've rather enjoyed writing this one from the perspective of a helplessly humiliated bad guy, to be honest.
6/29/23, 6:05 AM
Is amazing story and very hot. I hope to see you more from you when you contest is over

The Author
6/29/23, 8:04 PM
Thank you @[Evelded](/user/show/1215920)! And hopefully you will, I've been enjoying writing this one, and have some new ideas for some other stories (and some time to get them written, now).
6/29/23, 7:13 PM
Ngl, I cannot wait to read the next part
6/29/23, 4:23 PM
I loved the relatively slow transformation of this one. There were a couple places where the perspective changed from third person to second person, weirdly, but otherwise, it was very well written!
6/29/23, 4:22 PM
It is a masterpiece. Thanks. I hope to read much more from you.
6/29/23, 4:17 PM
Fuck that was hot! Great story, you're one of my new favorite authors on the site!
6/29/23, 3:56 PM
:heart_eyes: Really cool story! Lem, noooo!!!! Quick, the boyfriends, someone help the poor part-halfling! :scream: